Looking for someone to read and critique the first chapter of my fantasy novel.

Discussion in 'The Bookshelf' started by thirdeyempeazy, May 12, 2015.

  1. Title says it all. Looking for someone to read and critique the first chapter of my fantasy novel. Comment if you would do this for me. Thank you.
     
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  2. It is a game of thrones/lord of the rings type book.
     
  3. Can you post your favorite part from the chapter?
     
  4. Its only the prologue
     
  5. Oh yea. I'm down.

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  6. Ill message you
     
  7. You can send it to me. Busy with school work but I am an English major. I'll use different techniques to criticize the chapter and give feedback


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  8. I would be down to check it out. Let me know. :bongin:
     
  9. sent u a reply
     
  10. I'd be interested! I love high fantasy and I've worked as a copy editor and creative writer.
     
  11. How much do you have done? That first chapter will be revised fifty times, so unless you have a lot more story down, I suggest moving forward and going back to the first chapter later. Also check out the little book, Wired for Story, which will make you go duh at all the small improvements you can make in chapter 1.
     

  12. I would love to
     
  13. I will happily read it! Could you message me?
     
  14. I’m not much of a fantasy guy but I am a fan of writers. I wish you well OP.
     

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