Title says it all. Looking for someone to read and critique the first chapter of my fantasy novel. Comment if you would do this for me. Thank you.
You can send it to me. Busy with school work but I am an English major. I'll use different techniques to criticize the chapter and give feedback Sent from my iPhone using Grasscity Forum
How much do you have done? That first chapter will be revised fifty times, so unless you have a lot more story down, I suggest moving forward and going back to the first chapter later. Also check out the little book, Wired for Story, which will make you go duh at all the small improvements you can make in chapter 1.