yoooo so I've posted music here before a while ago under the name 57r417 k1ll4h and was kind of a cocky prick about it and my account got blocked. My bad lol. Anyway I've grown up a lot both as a person and musically and fell in love with hip hop. Personally I think I am reallyyyyyy good but go ahead and hate and flame all you want. I recorded everything at least 1.5 years ago and haven't had time to dedicate to music lately but I'm about to setup another studio in my new place. Check me out!!! soundcloud.com/mattblunted Everything is mixed and mastered by me and I'm in no way shape or form a quality audio engineer but I think it suffices.
I only heard the 47 Goons track, but I felt that you tried to rhyme more than spit an actual message. "I'm nicer than a slice of pie"? Sounds coo but I'm into deeper, more conceptual shit. I'm gonna listen to more tho. This shit's cool tho. Like the other songs better. You got talent. I like how you can use big words and complicated phrases, but still sound natural. Sounds pretty clear too, I can hear almost every word. A lot of simple punchlines, but I still like it. "Heating up, microwaving, I'm so crispy I'm a slice of bacon" kinda wack but I loved the "outclassed like recess" line, and the standout/porch line. Basically, I like when you use 2 forms/meanings of a word to create a punchline. Especially when 1 form isn't thought up that much. Standout/porch is cool. Same with outclassed like Recess. Because there's two distinct forms of the words "outclassed" and "Standout". Nice like a slice of pie, and heating up, microwaving are not cool. I don't really like the concepts of the songs tbh.. They all sound the same. They all seem like "I'ma use big words about how I can rap to sound like I can rap good". I couldn't tell you the difference between one song and the next. I mean you can rhyme for sure, but I want to hear a song about a topic, and have you stay on that topic the whole time. I want to hear you create hip-hop music, not just rapping rhymes. That's when your rhyming will really get tested. Because you can obviously rhyme, but can you rap and make music? When I hear 12 songs on an album, I want to be able to differentiate each and every song, without hesitation. This song is about topic A, this song is about topic B, this one about topic C, etc. I like each song to have it's own unique flare. Your's all have the same vibe. Rhyming on point, but can you conceptualize those rhymes? Because everybody and anybody and both their moms can rhyme things, but not everybody can make songs. But it's pretty cool, and honestly I'm trying to be as critical as possible to catapult you forward. And other than the topics of your songs, I can't complain too much. I could probably say your voice needs more emotion, but that would be nitpicking. A lot of dudes get away with a monotone flow. You can too. But I like it, definitely looking forward to your progress. Post in the Post Your Verse thread if you feel like it. Honestly it kinda fell off but used to be thorough with the bars. If you look halfway back towards the beginning, you'll see what I mean. Talent in there. And you'll see how other people craft their bars, and you'll definitely get ideas of how to shape yours.