How does this short song I wrote sound?

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by Loner Stoners, Feb 7, 2015.

  1. #1 Loner Stoners, Feb 7, 2015
    It can be interpreted as rock or rap, whichever you prefer.
     
    Got a watch that tell the time
    got a girl, she can rhyme
    everyday i'm feeling fine
    everyday my sun shine
    Got a heart, it never beats
    never get enough sleep
    when i lie i always weep
    always tryna count sheep.

     
  2. #2 zacwhosmokes, Feb 7, 2015
    It reminds me of when I'm just thinking laying in bed before I fall asleep. Dope.
     
  3. #3 Annicus, Feb 7, 2015
    Nice bro, add more to it.
     

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