Lyrics;Give me your thoughts

Discussion in 'The Musician in U' started by CanIBeShaggy, Dec 21, 2014.

  1. #1 CanIBeShaggy, Dec 21, 2014
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    Its grungy end I wrote it in about 10-25 mins
     

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  2. #2 CanIBeShaggy, Dec 21, 2014
     
  3. #3 Annicus, Jan 6, 2015
    Decent, you could mix up your rhyming scheme a little but I write mostly rap songs so I'm used to things like that. The chorus is good, nice hook, that's what I suck at, choruses lol
     

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