Me And My Brother Trying Our Hand In Rapping

Discussion in 'Real Life Stories' started by Darth_Mal, Sep 16, 2014.

  1. #1 Darth_Mal, Sep 16, 2014
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  2. #2 MadLibz, Sep 16, 2014
    I dig it,
    Maybe add a little flair or a something extra
    Other than that it sounds great!
    He raps on point with the beat which is good

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  3. #3 Spooderman, Sep 16, 2014
    Is this your first time rapping? Or just first time recording?
    Anyways, I really liked it! Cool beat, nice flow and all-right lyrics. Maybe add a bit more enthusiasm in your voices next time? :) good job!

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  4. #4 Majestic Raven, Sep 16, 2014
    I usually don't listen to stuff that people are advertising on here, because I find it annoying. But I did like this :metal:
     
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  5. #5 Cawdswallup, Sep 16, 2014
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    No shit of a word you two sound a bit like my friend and I.

    I enjoyed it.
    I didn't listen to it all because i'm on my phone but everyone said such kind things I had to check it out.
     
  6. #6 Kiefsweat, Sep 16, 2014
    dude this is fucking dope
     
  7. #7 csfxm, Sep 17, 2014
    Its good. Maybe a bit more aggression and a tiny bit faster and youd nail it! Can you freestyle/acapella too?

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  8. #8 splashie, Sep 17, 2014
    Both flows were great, no need for more agression imo

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  9. #9 Darth_Mal, Sep 18, 2014
    Nah. Just my first time rapping/recording with my brother. And thanks bro i appreciate it


    JESUS GOT SHOT IN THE FACE
    I greatly appreciate the love and criticism and will keep your opinions in mind for next time.


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  10. #10 Boomhauer, Sep 18, 2014
    It was ok. Just seem like you had a dull tone.

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  11. #11 Darth_Mal, Sep 18, 2014
    Lol i know man. But trust me thats just how my voice sounds. Haha. I'll make sure to put more energy next time


    JESUS GOT SHOT IN THE FACE
    Haha nah man i suck at freestyling. Unless im high of course haha


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  12. #12 weedk33per, Sep 19, 2014
    i was so baked i had read the title of the thread and i thougt it says:

    Me and my boner trying our hand in fapping


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  13. #13 rain dancer, Sep 19, 2014
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  14. #14 normac, Sep 19, 2014
    That was rather sick! Good stuff, good luck with future work!
     
  15. #15 King Willie, Sep 19, 2014
    Lol, I read it as raping. Tag team shit.
     

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