Hello everyone, I recently made some songs and slowly am starting to make some beats now for new ones and would like to hear feedback. I messed up a bit but I did try and there both freestyles so you know. https://soundcloud.com/tbonegoesin Attacking this life -https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PdlLZyAIkH4 Living Life - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ktbYDODWZLs Thanks for your time and feedback I'm working on becoming better.
Dude you are practically whispering into the microphone like you are scared. Be a badass and shout that stuff like a drill sargeant. I'm a crip from Compton, I'm a blood from Watts. I got an UZI in my hand and I call the shots! I got an UZI in my hand I got my finger on the trigger And i'll blow you away cause i'm a mean fuckin nigga
I know thats how the first one is. But the 2nd one is better to me at least I think. And thanks for it I appreciate it. I will start doing that more and being louder. and I enjoy that I know what you mean.