Dope. I liked the Robin Williams bit at the end; really brought the song together. If you get a min check out my verse I laid above your post.
@JeanShirt, just peeped your freestyle not bad... only thing i would suggest is rap with confidence... Rap like you're saying it on purpose, you'll be amazed how much of a difference it makes. but peep my video blades and if you like follow us on Soundcloud. we're releasing an album next friday for those interested as well. Peace https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pB8diiihFR8&list=UUWExHWSz3ha3sZJOLrEvg5w
https://soundcloud.com/john-sutherland-16/brutal-honesty-sutherland With a mixed-up elixir of liquor inside my liver, I'm stiffer than Hitler's rigor finger on a trigger in Winter. Brutal honesty, I want to force every chick into sodomy. It's comedy to me, passed down like aristocracy. I'll horribly cause bodily harm with such ferocity, that possibly I'll partially turn the bitch into broccoli. A vegetable on my testicles, every bone in her skeletal, split just like a decimal, pain that's irreparable. Cerebral something sceptical, simply something unbearable, retinal's burnt from terrible images, summing-up Sutherland as seminal. I'm the Devil, you're just mental wanting to mess with such levels, of intricate arrhythmic on lyrics spit despite red eye-vessels. Yo, let's admit it, not kidding, I cannot go a minute, without a bit of bud lit in my lungs, my kid, I live it, better hit it! You better clam down, crabby, fore' I go ham, no-sarnie. Barmy, sipping kettle-water with my posse for a hobby. Getting more stoned than African thieves until our eyes beam, blood-red like bloodstreams with Satanic symmetries. I'm that tongue-twisting Atheist anchor with a double-you, I'm spewing so much shit my spit's infected with brown residue. Does that mean I spit shit? No, it don't you fucking freak, it means I shit on fucking beats and diarrhoea on you queefs. My masterpiece'll be the centrepiece of anything released, so I believe one day I'll police the game before I leave it deceased.
Dope lyrics and i like the flow. But the your voice sounds like you recorded off of a phone or something. Did you record this inside an actual studio? JESUS GOT SHOT IN THE FACE
I recorded it on a Shure M58 mic in my room. It just isn't on a great preamp, nor is my room sound proof. Thanks though.
Ohhhhhh. Well damn. As soon as you upgrade to something better i'd like to hear more. *thumbs up* JESUS GOT SHOT IN THE FACE
man double takes are sloppy on this one, but check out Chillin' in the ESC as well if you can its a bit cleaner. Anyone else in the Evergreen State? https://soundcloud.com/jeremiah-milli-n/portrait
Hey All, Nimoejah here for a smooth track for ya'll to listen to while blazing: https://soundcloud.com/nimoejah/indonesia-mack-deezoe-ft-nimoejah
Yes bruh,,,,lets work https://soundcloud.com/bcpbackpacker/just-flow-b-c-p-backpacker-ft Im the second dude
Dopeness in here.....Here is my track Im the first flow. https://soundcloud.com/bcpbackpacker/curious-snippet