Apex Word's Verse you lack heart, only because i ate it, i made through a first round, only because im hated, i made it look easy, but beleive me its complicated, spit so much shit, it leaves me constipated, big barrels put shells though your art, open your ribcage and push nails through your heart, keep your ass on a leash so only speak when i tell you bark, and nobody can tell you apart, when i grind you up, thinkin you leave me gassed from those lines you pump, ima find you chump, and disintegrate your spine, cause your soul dissapears when you intergrate with mine, ima tyson punch this punks cheeks, thought it was beef buts its only lunch meat, losin his front teeth, no way you could stump me, im bascially, a god that satan wouldn't pray to meet, spit in ancient greek, this bitch can't get a taste of me, and ninja, i really like your skills dude, but im gonna have to kill you, maybe fill you with pills to, paralyze your body, and touch a scapel to your hobby, i take this seriously, hank hill to your bobby, if anyones nearing victory, its clearly me, so back down or get your ass clowned, or tapped out, acting froggy in the deep end, i'll let this cat drown, i'll let this black hound clamp down, celebratin in the background, hella hated but i pack rounds, expellin cases when i blast crowds, but only hittin this bitch, electrocute a flow, im hittin its switch, and whippin its kids, for givin my lip, i've written in sins, so i have to melt his face, and i have the belt in place, in the outter realms of space, just an alien thats prouder than its race, about to tell this fake, what its like to see power and his face, GaNinja's Verse Im'a Apex predator, in this battle im deadin ya, fickle wit a sickle this ninjas' bout to be shreddin ya lets face it im better bruh, break you down til ya cellular, you call this a battle? can I get a real competitor? Ill buck this duck fuck send him flyin back to Oregen, Next thing you know open casket liquor pourin in methods leave you shattered, battered broken like some porcelain, have this bitch wishin that his momma had aborted him Im just sittin back blowin on stacks of imported shit you in back alleys blowin dick just to snort some shit blades watch me torch this bitch, if he got kids they orphans quick Im takin back whats mine like you didn't pay the mortgage bitch leave you bent like contortionists, reachin my peak im flourishin your witnessin a christinin, watchin my metamorphasis. you thought you could handle this? without even a pot to piss? Got glocks wit grips an plenty clips, hope you finished your bucket list. @[member="Apex Word"] vs @[member="GaNinja"] Click HERE for sign-up/information thread. This is a 2nd round match, both battlers need to check in within 24 hrs and have another 24 hrs to send their verse to me (Glock Coma) via PM after checking in. Make sure you read the rules below. Vote on all the other battles if you want people to vote on your match
I hope so lol...Apex is nice with it...disappointed that you got DQ'd cuz i liked your verse, hope to see you in the next tourney...in one of the later rounds that is..lol
Thanks man but Lol me too man me too. Hopefully we can start having them more frequently I'm always down for that shit.
Tough call but I'm leaning towards Apex because the it flowed better for me. Both had some clever word play and punches I enjoyed.
your witnessin a christinin, watchin my metamorphasis. This one is givin me some trouble, i dont even have time to vote i gotta head to work but shit.. Apex for whatever reason did not finish as strong, it looks like he wrote more but it got excluded, i dunno what to say.. Ill come back and vote sunday if its still open good luck guys i predict a tie tho great effort from both
Apex came good as he did in his first round, however I really like Ninja's verse. His verse was really unique even including rhetorical questions and some really unique schemes. Apex came good again though, once again filling his verse with loads of content and some amazing punches. However I feel as though Ninja's verse flows slightly better (atleast for me, I think this is due to Apex's style and his longer lines), that slightly tips the balance in Ninja's favour for me. +1 Ninja. (Great battle, really enjoyed this, massively contested. Big up both parties).
Good looks blades, Apex put down a hell of a verse. Im excited to see what the total outcome is. And I realized i had a few spelling errors after I re-read it, but oh well. I was mad high lol.
PUNCHES - Ninja (This was the hardest category to choose for me, both came with a lot of good punches but I picked Ninja in the end because more of his were direct while Apex had some weird angles, and the schemes werent really hitting for me) NAME PLAY - Ninja (Only 1 reference from each side, but I really like the Apex predator shit so Ninja takes this one) WORD PLAY - Tie (Couldn't really choose a side.. Both verses werent word-play heavy, neither are the styles from the battlers) PERSONALS - Ninja (A lot of Apex's shit was general with no real personals, Ninja had that Oregon mention which is the main reason he gets this category) FLOW - Ninja (Apex's long lines are usually a pretty clean read but this verse was a little choppy at parts. Ninja kept it goin and his lines flowed well) MULTI'S - Apex (Ninja had some decent multi's, but Apex is probably one of the best multi rappers on GC. He definitely brought a good multi game for that verse) ORIGINALITY - Ninja (Like I said before, A lot of Apex's shit was general, I'd like to see him come a little more direct at his opponents with maybe a personal line, nameplay or wordplay to spice shit up every now and then. Ninja had some nice references and his verse was a little more creative than Apex's) Would have liked to see Apex with a little more hard hitting content for a round 2 battle. His round 1 verse trumps this one by far. Ninja needs a little more variety in his content but overall had the better battle verse today.. Good battle +1 GaNinja
Damn this is a super tough one to call. As a king of the hill stan (avi should make that obvs) I loved that line in Apex's verse. But If I'm going to be honest I felt like GaNinja said a lot more harder shit in a lot less words. I really liked some of his punches and wordplay and flowed really nicely. I actually feel like neither finished as strong as they could have but I'm going to have to give this to GaNinja but this was a really close battle and so far the best one. +1GaNinja
I knew Apex was gonna kill me on those multis, lol...dude is nasty with it. I tried to throw in as many as possible, but I knew he would come hard with em. Thats usually why I enjoy reading Apexs' other stuff. Multi game is on point.
Tough call. I'm not really bout that rap battle life. I'm not to keen on the murder metaphors because they seem to take over every verse i read; i just look for humour, wordplay and pop cult. That being said, Ninja's fit better with what i look for, so he has my vote
when I see a recorded verse posted up here then I'll rate this garbage. but this is just dumb. lyrics are just that: lyrics. if you can't RAP then it's just lyrics. someone go record a track and then maybe these "rap battle" thread could be justified.
If you don't like it why the fuck you reading and posting in the threads then fam? You don't like it? Dont read it, simple. We do this to have fun and hone our writing abilities. I've posted songs before, but we don't need to justify ourselves or please one person.