just put out my first track ever CHECK IT lmk what you think (diss track)

[ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pniP10Dpno4&feature=plcp]Death To Bruno - YouTube[/ame]

so this dude is going around my town picking up 16 year olds while hes 26 i whooped his ass and made this song. lmk haters are welcome.

that made my night^

Cool song. Poorly mixed recording though. Need to remix and pull the voice out more, it gets lost in the track. Try pulling some bass out (of the vocals) and give the voice more mid and high maybe?.

You should try to incorporate more multies.
Also some contradictory bars in there considering why you made it.
First song is a diss track..
Not really feeling that hard vibe you're trying to put out.

needs more in the music. vocals are fine. this is better than anything i could possibly do haha so kudos to you

needs more in the music. vocals are fine.

Really? Vocals just sound a little muddy to me. I'm no sound engineer, so take it with a grain if salt.....

well i used a shitty mic and i just wanted to put it out there his shit sounds worse then that tho thanks for the input ill take it into consideration with my next track, these comments are why i love GC thanks guys

wait... so you're first track ever is a diss track?

and to add about the contradictory lines i honestly just wrote shit to piss him off

wait... so you're first track ever is a diss track?

yea lol..i dont see a problem there

Not feelin it.

I thought it was pretty funny, good job, but yeah its abit hard to hear the vocals.

cheesy as fk.

Are you planning on recording more songs?
Or was this just the first thing you did, and it happened to be a diss track, however you have no intention of doing more?

Idunno, I don't really feel the badass theme. I don't know you personally but I don't see ya running out and stabbing and shooting him.
I would have made something so ridiculous that he'd be like shit... dude's crazy...

Like the wizard rap from the bodybuilding contest on Workaholics.

"I'm flyin' on a dragon you be ridin in a rental/
While you dance up in the club I summon blizzard elementals"
Shit's real fuckin good

Stop your singing this instant young man. Terrible, terrible, terrible. Shitty throw away beat, horribly mixed track, contrived lyrics and an overall lack of inspiration. Write about something worthwhile. Or if you want to make a diss track then at least go hard. That being said, I fucking hare diss tracks that focus on one lowly person. Dismantle the industry, government, or organization, but fuck committing a whole song to some raggity lowlife. Mic sounds fucking awful also. Did you record with a carrot?


Oh yes, I also don't think method and red would appreciate the sample very much. They're actually famous rappers
With talent and stuff.

Edited by RuseOfMetacarpi, 23 July 2012 - 12:26 PM.

Stop your singing this instant young man. Terrible, terrible, terrible. Shitty throw away beat, horribly mixed track, contrived lyrics and an overall lack of inspiration. Write about something worthwhile. Or if you want to make a diss track then at least go hard. That being said, I fucking hare diss tracks that focus on one lowly person. Dismantle the industry, government, or organization, but fuck committing a whole song to some raggity lowlife. Mic sounds fucking awful also. Did you record with a carrot?

Oh yes, I also don't think method and red would appreciate the sample very much. They're actually famous rappers
With talent and stuff.

this comment has made me sub to this to listen when i get home

i have a diss track floating around on the web somewhere...i think

Stop your singing this instant young man. Terrible, terrible, terrible. Shitty throw away beat, horribly mixed track, contrived lyrics and an overall lack of inspiration. Write about something worthwhile. Or if you want to make a diss track then at least go hard. That being said, I fucking hare diss tracks that focus on one lowly person. Dismantle the industry, government, or organization, but fuck committing a whole song to some raggity lowlife. Mic sounds fucking awful also. Did you record with a carrot?


Oh yes, I also don't think method and red would appreciate the sample very much. They're actually famous rappers
With talent and stuff.

looool i used a laptop mic lets see you do better? and throw away beat? bitch dome me.

looool i used a laptop mic lets see you do better? and throw away beat? bitch dome me.

did you really ask "let me know what you think" in the thread title and then get all butt hurt over that dudes comment?

its criticism man, if you can't handle that, maybe you shouldn't be making music...or posting it online?

but i lol'd hard when he asked if you used a carrot to record haha

it is a throw away beat though....