The reflective material looks nice and tight. First off i would like to say that i myself have not built or done a PC grow myself. I have however done some research on the subject. I recently wrote some of the information i have gathered in
Ms.NatureFaerie thread. Another pc grower,
kronicNZ, with a very nice looking setup i would recommend checking out also posted there.
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With the setup you got right now i would imagine it might get a bit hot with 5 bulbs.
Things i would look into at this stage is ventilation placement and light proofing.
First off it is wise to have exhaust up high and intake down low. This is because hot air rises, and with a low exhaust all you will do is suck out the cold air.
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I would recommend placing exhaust up high, even higher then the current intakes, and the intakes down low as low as you can get them. If heat is still a issue you can simply cut some picture frame glass, or if that is to much of a challenge just get some plexi glass, heat it where you want to cut with a lighter and just run a cardboard knife over it. trying to keep the width of the square just the same size as the cabinet width. This should more or less become air tight edges when pressed against the isolating reflective material you are using. Then the length of the glass/plexi square as the length of the cabinet minus maybe 1 inch. Then hard mount it maybe 1/2 inch under the bulbs and leaving the 1 inch gap on the opposite side of exhaust fan. I recon you can move the light a bit higher as well. Just think of the roof as a reflector and move them up really high.

I do not know if stealth is a issue for you. If you do not light proof the fans, you must keep your computer inside a cabinet or dark place, and not open the door or let light to the computer during night time. If the plant do not get 12 hours of darkness it will not start to flower.
I do not know how much stealth is a issue for you. But i can tell you that weed smells very strongly. If you want to get rid of it i would suggest carbon scrubber, this will also light proof the exhaust, but it requires a powerful fan.
For light traps there are many different designs out there, i would suggest ninjascrubber DIY. It is the one with several angles glues on top of each other with small dividers. You can get cheap plastic corners instead of expensive aluminum.
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