tell me if this drug essay is any good. I wrote it on adderall so it has to be right?

[aaaaa8]

Ok so i wrote this about 2 months go on 40mg of adderall. It was my first time using it so i was kind of speedy.

I think i made some pretty good points. What do you guys think?I cut off some of it because its not something anyone would have gotten because that part was meant for something else.

I couldnt think of a title so i gave it a cheesy classic one. I took 60mg of adderall this morning so im still a bit tweaked if you cant tell.

Revolution


We are the counterculture. We have an idea that we can go past the mind that we are given randomly at birth. In the 60's a select few started realizing this and it scared the government. So they outlawed LSD and started the anti-marijuana propaganda. In the 80s the same thing happened to Ecstasy. Do you realize that psychiatrist gave E to their patients, a ****ing doctor with a P.h.D did this. It helped terminally ill patients face their mortallity. How can you outlaw something that does that? Im not saying turning into a pill popping E head is healthy, because it obviously isnt. But if you let yourself become that then it is your own damn fault


We choose to rebel against the right and even the left in some cases. I mean isnt our most basic primal feeling (sex) the most hedonistic thing out there. Sure people used to be able to say it was for reproducing but with the invention of birth control and condoms that idea flew out the window. So what is wrong with seeking out pleasure every so often? Whether it be through a pill, chemicals, plants, or sex. I read online that a well respected psychologist stated that the drive to seek mind altering substances is present from birth, right along with the drive for food, shelter, and companionship. Imagine if the government tried to deny you food or shelter. Noone would stand for that. Plus half the people out there who use drugs use them for hedonistic purposes. Now theres nothing wrong with that either. In essence its the same thing as being a womanizer, and society doesnt forbid that, in fact certain people praise it. But the chosen few who use drugs for opening and expanding their consciousness are the ones who have a clue.


In the year or so ive been experimenting with drugs,(and i use experimenting cause i believe thats what we all are doing) ive gone through the biggest ups and downs of my life. From staying out all night having a blast and chilling with friends, or getting lost in a beautiful dream land while listening to Sgt Pepper, to almost being expelled for skipping to much school, or the slow hatred of the closest thing i have to a best friend. ( even though hes not really a friend at all and now i realize that) But i consider all these things for the best. Im starting to accept myself for who i am and accept others for what they are not. Without drugs, im not sure any of this would of happened. Im also fully aware that some people can achieve this without drugs and i have the uttmost respect for them. But who are a group of people who we call the governmenrt to tell us how we can go about achieving this.


So i will move on, make new friends, stop skipping class and better myself. Even after one my worst drug experiences ( taking 600mg of DXM and spending 3 hrs throwing up and missing 2 days of school) i still took somethng from it. Drugs taught me this, to take something away from even the worst of situations. So im writing this essay in school on 40mg of adderall, and guess what? Without adderall i wouldnt have done this. By the way adderall is now my new favorite drug.

[Oddball]

adderall helps me so much in school

[mokeweed]

yes, def a good essay, learned a few things, including the part about the human drive for mind altering substances from birth. Very cool stuff.

[aaaaa8]

thanks guys for the insight.

[coolrunnings]

Its not bad.

Some irrelevant personal referances that could have been omitted but other than that, its not bad.

Personally wouldnt use it as a school paper though...

[aaaaa8]

haha nah i didnt write it for school, i wrote it during school. I just started thinking of drug culture and one thought led to another and this essay was made.

[BLARNEYSTONES]

it' read like your were stoned when your wrote it

[alienscience]

I think of it like this. If a bunch of people that smoke pot like it, chances are your teacher won't.