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Unread 03-12-2011, 02:14 AM
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Unread 03-12-2011, 03:37 AM
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let us peep this
oh word i'll never collab with another GCer and not share it with GC

probably not gonna send you anything til tomorrow berry.. im tryin to finish up some other stuff i was workin on with a homie today and then im gonna get my drink on

probably gonna use this beat though so hopefully you feel it. on second thought im not sure im gonna use this beat. its on the table though.
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Unread 03-12-2011, 05:04 AM
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^^ Iv listened to that song at least 50 times in the last couple days. Najubes is fucking amazing. R.I.P

Iv found profound ways to project my sound waves,
the definition of dopeness still downplays,
the amount of dope I could put into one phrase,
let me put it this way, The D.E.A.'s
not seen so much dope in one place,
one taste, of the flavor I kick,
and everything else gonna be tasting like shit
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Unread 03-12-2011, 08:00 AM
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"Waking up from a lucid dream,
I had a strange thought occur to me.
And that same thought has been branded in my mind.
And will forever remain there till my end of time.
There’s more to life than…….. this.
Why does this world seem so dark all of a sudden?
And every single day is just the same exact routine……until I die???
The people around me are living a repeating quiet parade.
Can I pretend……to live life like them…… my entire life? And let this vision fade?"

(same song)

"Our government spending trillions of dollars on war. Result: Blood, Death, and Slaughter.
When thousands miles away, children will walk hours for their daily dose of water.
Americans hypnotized by television, cell phone, and computer screens.
Who is living our life? Us? Or the machines?"
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Unread 03-12-2011, 02:03 PM
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Ayo for yayo, boy I'm insane bro
Stay awake all day sleep stays away
Go dodo for dolo solo wit me fofo
AK stay by my plates Step 'way ok?
Don't care whatchu rep or say just do it
Then you get respect or get done stupid
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Felt like writing some shit about the iraq war. Dunno why. Might make a song out of it.

I'm just one of 100000, voices overshadowed by bomb blasts,
Soldiers broadcast the outcome of a small shack,
Never thought for a second before the walls smashed,
That maybe children could be amongst that?
Its a wrong act, and they claim to be fighting for peace,
Spot one soldier in a village and call a strike from the east?
You better recite your beliefs because we shouldnt be killin people,
Lets fight for the weak, the innocent, the ones we forget about,
Their voices will be heard, just let it out and believe in a small fact
We should never doubt..

We have family.. and thats all we care about,
You can shoot at our homes but you will never scare us out,
We're united in the path of life, We never asked to fight
but now we're wonderin if we gunna last the night..
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Unread 03-12-2011, 09:46 PM
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Damn im bored so i came on the forums to make a verse...
Not shit to do, i feel like a dead man laying in his hearse
need to get some bud and friends to chill
When I see hot girls i always go in for the kill
Trying to live the life to its fullest but its too damn expensive
Have to hustle hard, but theres too much stress im getting hypertensive
Doing psychedelics on my couch watching television
Tripping hard its feel like gods trying to show me a vision
Telling me to get up off my ass
study hard and pass my class
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Unread 03-12-2011, 10:50 PM
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first time recording shit myself...
i used the mic that came with my gateway pc back in like 98 haha.

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I just got to get some shit of my chest
I'm not complaining but fuck it, I know I'm blessed
But right now I'm so stressed
Like its finals week and I got to study for 5 tests

Moms bitching at me, at best
Jesus what shit will she come up with next
Probably about me not making my bed
That bitch feeding me shit, PEZ

Tryna to keep my self outta trouble
By literally placing my self in a bubble
Unfortunately I'm lonely no one to cuddle
Time to come back, so I get in the huddle

Shut yo damn trap, ho
I can't let you stress me no more
The same shit, everyday is getting old
It's spring and everywhere I go is cold
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Unread 03-12-2011, 11:16 PM
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first time recording shit myself...
i used the mic that came with my gateway pc back in like 98 haha.

YouTube - verse

Super nice yo, also hella quality for that mic

....anywho...


Yo, no need for tunes and sounds for me to break it down
I'm lit off fumes from herbs ground, never burned out
Flow will flip your shirt out, you need to get the bugs out
you're system is on meltdown, spit it smooth as felt now

Spit hysteria without a trace or clue of the crime scene
I was brain hacked by an alien, now he's inside me
Revitalize your veins, get plugged with the i v
Words as obnoxious as babies crying and children dying
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Unread 03-12-2011, 11:18 PM
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We're constantly falling off the face of the Earth
oblivious to faith no one ever in the mosque or church
You're close minded way of life keeps you in the system
The same one that stopped michael jackson from living
pockets full of cash and nonstop abuse to the women
ignore the lyrics and you just bob your head to the rhythm
the news is feeding you false interpretations of other nations
your mind is basic , real life is something you'll no longer be facin
The whole world is racist, not one race that isn't hated
A society of people that's never contemplated
the ground rumbles and shakes from japans tsunamis and earthquakes
the media is sure to cover and record the whole thing
Every morning people goin to starbucks to get their coffee
make them shaky and crazy like m'ammar gadaffi
trying to score the most goals like a game of hockey
the rebels fight their way into the nations capital
confident and ready knowing their leader is radical
rounds are shooting but the sounds are purely political
Yeah it's so original and the battles so habitual
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and I just recorded this , please let me know what u think

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Re: Post your verse!

Yeah thanks my man, I got a lot of work to do, sometimes I put too much words in one verse and run outta breath and it fucks me up.

by the way , u got great flow my man, good shit, maybe we can collab one of these days if u want to
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alright im done berry gonna send you this shit when i get home. like i said my format is a little weird but once my vocals are over there's a lil piano interlude you can use to do whatever you want and then room for another 16. n if youre not really feelin the beat just lemme know n i'll finish it myself and we can go in on somethin else

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hook(x2):
i was deep in a sleep
my dreams seemed within reach
and i was feelin at peace
feelin the breeze on the beach

verse1:
but its kinda like i never came back
and that dream is where i stayed at
to chase that people said i wasnt good enough
hood enough, but that dont mean i shouldnt (what?)
they never knew i woulda stuck with it..
no matter what they said i was gonna fuck with it
its like im popeye and im about to touch spinach
and switch into a tough image with a rough grimace
yo fuck snitches kid, i had enough quidditch
not much digits but what kinda love is this?
the illest..n ima fulfill this dream if it kills me to do it
fuck bein rich and affluent id rather live for the music
not by it, why if i love it so much shouldnt i try it?
this is somethin i'll die with.

*hook*

verse2:
mic in my hand and some sand on my feet
ripe with the cash so i could stand on my feet
and id still handle a beat as a scandalous feat
and pass the pipe to the fans full of the amorous leaf
for all the cameras to see but it's a laughable dream
...somebody wake me up.

verse 3:
*SLAP*
damn bitch why you slappin me!?
well, cause you asked me to actually..
well, now that im up gimme a beat to tear through
and do you maybe got a sandwich to spare too?
no.. how dare you!
alright.. enough playin around
i got things to accomplish findin my way to get out
im layin it down practicin playin it out
and showin all the haters what im makin of doubt
im stakin it out.. there's a fire now in place of my mouth
im clearin trash outta my head and takin it out
and steerin straight for the route where my dream is my life
and only my cash is more vast than the green that i light
im fiendin for mics.. stay on my path like a zipper
and every beat'll get diced, im jacked like the ripper
im never needin a light.. i strike a match with my kisser
wantin media hype.. ten on the graph of the richter
who wanna ask for my picture?
about half of your sisters, naw im messin again
i put my flesh in the pen, inject my venom in them
to make incredible gems through my theoretical lens
yall dont got balls you just pretend to be men

*hook*

verse4:
can you relate to this dream-state that i create?
i see straight through the image you g's fake
but i need cake so i gotta compete
when theyre droppin the beat
i make concoctions complete
i will not be defeated
cause i can make it real if i dreamed it
i was deep in a sleep and receded
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you siphon breath to try the test and i would guess that you haven't met the lions den,
the highest yet, set like diamonds on a rhymers neck, signin checks and denying debts,
fly like private jet, only let the bass move me and i got life like it was based on a movie,
the cameras stay in my face like they wanna shoot me but i only came for the groupies,
i only change when it suits me or i act deranged saying what im saying way too loosely,
with a case of mange go insane on a smooth beat, im so dope cocaine would dilute me,
dont try to refute speech thats unique and includes teeth excuse me if you'd be so kind,
give me some roofies for my weed soaked mind and shoot me when i breath both lines,
what an energy rush as i erupt with my bleed soaked eyes, i mean blood coated in lies,

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