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Old 07-10-2008, 08:59 AM
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I proclaim to be Grasscity.com 's official MC

And I enter with this

AUDIO (and yes I made the beat, no you can't have it):
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...songID=6706058




LYRICS:
The Devil's Disco



Verse 1
Minions revive nature health and depravation
Youth advancement within government placement
Matic is an adjacent blatant statement
Shit upon and controlled since the fire was swept
Now its a tide that divides once coast from another
But the water's full of baggage - negative habits
Put the garbage in the reservoir next to the river
High class conspiracies - ignorance and dinner
~Severed vast with a spoon to the lips, that you tugged to remove
-He ripped his tongue out his mouth
The souls divine to hope to quote
He pulled the plug and stole the show
-With a sick-flo' devil's dis-co.

Verse 2
Demon in the day with the dirt desolate
Watch the weird work through the brain and the spirt
....Laugh at em', Drasmatic
Peace means progression
~ You just out of the question
We took the time till time took us
We scratched our heads like, "What The Fuck?"
All your designations devour the setup
America's impatient, its go and get up
(So) Double up your dosage, dip your boss down
Proving your a genius with a soul like James Brown
Its the big pay back, comprendo?
I still have faith-up-above but its the devils dis-co.

Verse 3
Beautiful loser maneuver heartless
High tech computerized generation artist
Staring into space, in a Texas maze
The boys in a daze clutched down with an a thousand yard gaze
Travesty timid - rap dexterity flow clown while they vividly witness
Get down if you love a fist
Every night, you write n shit
Whether on point, or for the method
A shameful reality suggests many questions
We all know this tho
It's the Devils Disco.
 
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Old 07-10-2008, 05:59 PM
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If you want to act cocky, you really need to come in with something better.

Why say "No you can't have the beat" right off the bat, no one asked for it, no one even commented on the song yet. The beat can be remade by a twelve year old, it's nothing special. Not to mention it's not mixed well, it sounds like you're mumbling half of your shit.

And declaring yourself an MC when you've only dropped a single mixtape, that apparently went nowhere, is not a good idea.

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Old 07-10-2008, 09:41 PM
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^ someone's touchy. this is an experimental project dude, i'm not serious. I just wanted to get people to listen.
 
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Old 07-10-2008, 09:49 PM
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Beat is weak, and it sounds more like your just talking than rapping. You need charisma.
 
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Old 07-11-2008, 12:12 AM
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Thumbs down. Maybe you should make more than 31 posts before getting bragging rights
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Old 07-11-2008, 02:09 AM
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Lets go ahead and clarify now if u dont like slug or MF Doom before 2003 your not going to like me. I have an original sense and style that u souljaboytellem' listeners don't understand.

I'm a poet, keyword: MC , I speak through poetry. I'm not a rapper.

Bragging rights? I don't want bragging rights. All I want to make music for this site, and see other people post their stuff for healthy competition/collaboration. If u want me to get my posts to your pleasure and waste my life on a website before taking a musical stand, your a buffoon.

You guys are lame. You can't do this shit? so stop bitching. If you can re-make the beat, go do it and show it to me, so I can clap my hands and call u a genius. Then turn around and make a better one.

Damn net geeks.

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Old 07-11-2008, 05:46 AM
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Had you presented your work in a "Hey guys, here's something I wrote, tell me what you think" kind of fashion, I probably would have given you props. I can feel the direction you're coming from. Definitely needs work, you need to be more confident and forward with your vocals. Either get some balls into your delivery or mix it better.

Beats don't have to be complex to be good, I'm a huge fan of simplicity myself, but when you assume someone already wants to have it, and it's so important that you have to declare it's not for sale, like it's some hot shit, it isn't shit.

Modesty is key.

If you can spit fire then by all means brag, but don't come weak.

And don't assume anything about us, you have no idea of our musical expertise or experience.

And none of us has to prove anything, because none of us came out and fronted.

ps:

MF still has it.

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