Rap battle anyone?

[pigninja]

Originally Posted by TokingToker

I'm just gonna kick it so listen everyone in here is bitchin
Cmon true killas no quittin get in the rap tor'ment
"Tournment" I wanna see that flow over pour'in
Yall fuccin niccas is snorin get up, it's the mour'nin
I'm smokin roaches on all my homies porches
Fake bitches we carryin the torches
No you fuccin cracchead you can't snort this
Get outta here nicca deport the coast fish

come on kids i'm better then you've ever been
i rapped better then that since eleven
severin heads raping sluts and gangster ways
leaves me amazed how many kids on this page
seem to think they live by gangster ways
crips and bloods talk of this and that
come out your ass when you battle rap
the new inductee of the scene
mvp hall of fame of raping
this is my true calling
all you fake fucks claim balling
you get tape ducted?
duct taped gagged and raped
excuse my mistake
i never did graduate
but i do gradually make my way into your brain
infes-ting like mental illness
eli lilly says take this pill quick
what's that you don't understand?
sit down google that shit
power at hand internet revolutionary
you may shine once
but it's only momentary
i'm a rennasence man
you're gay and blow coke like van dam
i'm jackie chan
fucking heat val kilmer with my gun in hand
you claim serial killer and psycho
praying to god your flow is stronger then nyquil
sipping green shit smokin green hits
i'm like heroin to the veins
herotic stepping to the game
vigilanty kickin ass and takin names
i don't proclaim i'm profane
i blow like explosions hot like propane
i'll rap all day till i go insane
i'm feril and the world is tame
your sterile with your dick in ya hand
my sperm is swimming inside your mammas land
vaginal canal with my dick in command
pump once thrust bust
your little brother is 1 now
his flow is still better then yours wow
pow i throw lethal blows
but we all know your moms the one that really blows

[TokingToker]

Fucc it

1st song, just for you..

http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm...f-887ace614264

You ain't got shit on me kid..

[pigninja]

Originally Posted by TokingToker

Fucc it

2nd song, just for you..

http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm...f-887ace614264

You ain't got shit on me kid..

you have absolutely no rhythm, and you sound like shit. but it's funny how dillusional you are. hahahaha you're shit is horrible. i would rather eat dog shit then listen to your music. and it's not a diss, you're just horrible. so it's a fact.

[Scooplanders]

ahahhaha fuck you pigninja, you get on a track and show us how to spit faggot

[pigninja]

Originally Posted by Scooplanders

ahahhaha fuck you pigninja, you get on a track and show us how to spit faggot

www.myspace.com/chaoticallycorrect

who's the faggot now? you fucking knuckle head.

listen to either track, now i'm no 50 cent, but it sure sounds a lot better then all that other bullshit people are claiming as rap.

[TokingToker]

Originally Posted by pigninja

you have absolutely no rhythm, and you sound like shit. but it's funny how dillusional you are. hahahaha you're shit is horrible. i would rather eat dog shit then listen to your music. and it's not a diss, you're just horrible. so it's a fact.

You think your shit is any good man? Repeating your shit about 3 times.. Lets see you try to spit some shit like me.. Oh wait.. You can't.

[Scooplanders]

hahaha that shit is dope no doubt... id rather smoke an L to vest of metal rather than lucifer city jessus christ.

[Scooplanders]

but lucifers shit is more like a freestyle, that or he spit accapella and put the beat over himself which is fucking retarded. pigninja's shit is produced better which i like, it includes the hook and all that, good shit

[TokingToker]

My shit is freestyle.. Look at the name.. I don't write down shit.. So i wanna see this kid spit somethin freestyle not no written down shit and repeating yourself 12 times..

I don't have any good recording programs or anything thats all recorded with windows sound recorder.. He obviously got some kinda program to fix his shit straight

Lmao and lucifercity ain't finished It's still shit.. that wasn't intended to be put here for yall thats something I'm working on..

Listen to freestyle

[pigninja]

Originally Posted by TokingToker

My shit is freestyle.. Look at the name.. I don't write down shit.. So i wanna see this kid spit somethin freestyle not no written down shit and repeating yourself 12 times..

I don't have any good recording programs or anything thats all recorded with windows sound recorder.. He obviously got some kinda program to fix his shit straight

Lmao and lucifercity ain't finished It's still shit.. that wasn't intended to be put here for yall thats something I'm working on..

Listen to freestyle

Face it kid, you're shit is lame. If the only thing you can do is freestyle, stop now. Try writing something for once, because it's obvious to me freestyling isn't working out very well for you. Oh and btw, repeating myself "12" times, is called the hook, peep the lyrics, and then you might actually be enlightened as to what true hip hop is kid. There's more in one verse of my lyrics then you could put into a lifetime of writing. Ask anyone that knows hiphop if my shit is dope and you'll get the answer. Ask anyone that knows lyrics and they'll tell you my shits for real.

[TokingToker]

Haha, dawg cmon, this is a rap battle not write a song down. So either freestyle or bounce out. Anyone can write a song I'm even better at writting songs but I stick it freestyle.. So listen.. don't come in this thread with some wrotten down shit, come in here and speak your mind

If my shit was lame I wouldn't be in the studios with other rappers.. Yeah I'll admit lucifer city was lame as fucc but I still gotta fucc around with it, that was an early demo, so stop rating off that fuccing song, listen to freestyle you stupid beezy

[pigninja]

Originally Posted by TokingToker

Haha, dawg cmon, this is a rap battle not write a song down. So either freestyle or bounce out. Anyone can write a song I'm even better at writting songs but I stick it freestyle.. So listen.. don't come in this thread with some wrotten down shit, come in here and speak your mind

If my shit was lame I wouldn't be in the studios with other rappers.. Yeah I'll admit lucifer city was lame as fucc but I still gotta fucc around with it, that was an early demo, so stop rating off that fuccing song, listen to freestyle you stupid beezy

Studios? Shut the fuck up, you're too busy dreaming and not busy enough making quality music. I know studio quality rhymes when I hear them. One person I know of, myself, has that ability. You do not, so don't clame fame to something you don't got bro. I see through you like I see through saranrap, in fact, that's what I'm going to call you from now on, saranrap..because you're see through like clear plastic. If I spit something once, whether it's a demo or not, it sounds way better then anything you'll ever create. Funny thing is, freestyle or no freestyle, it's obvious to me you lack rhythm. There wasn't a single word on your freestyle that hit the beat, and you know it. I'm sure you know enough about music to know I'm the real deal, and in your heart, you know you're just a wannabe. It's hard to face I understand, but trust me, you know, so give up the act. Listen I'll take 2 minutes and write something for you just to show you how it's done.

this kid saranrap thinks he can spit
but this kid saranraps equipped with a clit
he walks around parading his dick
but the truth is he recieves
this *****s more bitch then a bitch
if you don't get the reference
go listen to real shit
cause I got the medal and the pendant
even though I'm half asleep
I can still respond to the beef
it's late on the east coast
but I can still smell a fish
and you got pussy all over your lips
so quit eating your own genitalia
your clits probably sore
cocks impale ya
cause you just a whore
if you ever went to prison
you'd be someones sweety
cause you just a pussy cat
i fly high like i'm tweety
suckerin suckotage!
this is probably the weakest flow
that i've ever written
but you sit down to piss ho
i only sit when i'm shittin
so shut your trap quick
before you get smacked like a bitch
you keep running your mouth
but you can't seem to back it up
unless someones dicks out
cause then you eat that shit up

[crackrockstdy89]

Originally Posted by pigninja

Studios? Shut the fuck up, you're too busy dreaming and not busy enough making quality music. I know studio quality rhymes when I hear them. One person I know of, myself, has that ability. You do not, so don't clame fame to something you don't got bro. I see through you like I see through saranrap, in fact, that's what I'm going to call you from now on, saranrap..because you're see through like clear plastic. If I spit something once, whether it's a demo or not, it sounds way better then anything you'll ever create. Funny thing is, freestyle or no freestyle, it's obvious to me you lack rhythm. There wasn't a single word on your freestyle that hit the beat, and you know it. I'm sure you know enough about music to know I'm the real deal, and in your heart, you know you're just a wannabe. It's hard to face I understand, but trust me, you know, so give up the act. Listen I'll take 2 minutes and write something for you just to show you how it's done.

this kid saranrap thinks he can spit
but this kid saranraps equipped with a clit
he walks around parading his dick
but the truth is he recieves
this *****s more bitch then a bitch
if you don't get the reference
go listen to real shit
cause I got the medal and the pendant
even though I'm half asleep
I can still respond to the beef
it's late on the east coast
but I can still smell a fish
and you got pussy all over your lips
so quit eating your own genitalia
your clits probably sore
cocks impale ya
cause you just a whore
if you ever went to prison
you'd be someones sweety
cause you just a pussy cat
i fly high like i'm tweety
suckerin suckotage!
this is probably the weakest flow
that i've ever written
but you sit down to piss ho
i only sit when i'm shittin
so shut your trap quick
before you get smacked like a bitch
you keep running your mouth
but you can't seem to back it up
unless someones dicks out
cause then you eat that shit up

What's this now, u'r claiming studio ability?
Sounds more to me like you're writing children's poetry
You're lyrics resemble something a 3rd grader wrote
You should be honored i even gave ur rap a quote
It's at toddler level, yeah a post-elementary style
While i've been busting flows for quite a while
Since back in 89, i'm the lyrical joker
Ease up now, quit messing with my boy TokinToker
He did u no harm, but i'll do you a favor
Let you know your style, has no hint of flavor
While like a tazer, i savor, my rhythmic jolt
Blast past ya in symmetry, with over five thousand volts
Destined for your helix, then to your inner ear
As my spoken voltage, fills you with undeniable fear
So ease up for a second, you best stick to writing jingles
I got more craft in my trash, than you got in your singles

[pigninja]

Originally Posted by crackrockstdy89

What's this now, u'r claiming studio ability?
Sounds more to me like you're writing children's poetry
You're lyrics resemble something a 3rd grader wrote
You should be honored i even gave ur rap a quote
It's at toddler level, yeah a post-elementary style
While i've been busting flows for quite a while
Since back in 89, i'm the lyrical joker
Ease up now, quit messing with my boy TokinToker
He did u no harm, but i'll do you a favor
Let you know your style, has no hint of flavor
While like a tazer, i savor, my rhythmic jolt
Blast past ya in symmetry, with over five thousand volts
Destined for your helix, then to your inner ear
As my spoken voltage, fills you with undeniable fear
So ease up for a second, you best stick to writing jingles
I got more craft in my trash, than you got in your singles

it's cool that you think
somehow i'm defeated
your raps are too simple
but you my friend are concieted
i was browsing this page
and i came up on some beats
sounds like you're in 3rd grade
with that shit you call street
just like your week flow
your instrumentals are soft
you backing jo-jo-joker?
or you just jerking him off?
sounds like you're boys with a faggot
and he's reeming your anus
tag teaming each other
saying "my rhymes are str8 genius"
your flow is commercial
and like everything else
my shits no rehearsal
and i still got the belt
you rhyme like dr suess
but i don't like green eggs and ham
there's some juice on your lip
oh wait now i know what it is man
it's from jokers wet pussy
my guess is your cocks in his tushy
this is a joke for me bro
this is my simplest flow
i'm not even trying
and somehow i strike blow after blow
you probably read my freestlye
and say that i like what you got
but the truth is my smile
is because you're sucking my cock
all i did was praise joker
and you raised your hand first
"let me blow you over and over"
i said sure i'll just squirt
then i realized i was the joker
and you were the fag
i snapped out of it quick
and rose from my nap
it was a fucking nightmare
oh yeah, joker gave you the clap
so that right there
is my story for you
about how you sucked joker off
until his balls became blue
you sucked his ball salt
and ate his nut like you do
you said "it has protein"
no shame in being gay
but don't act like a thug
and take it in the ass everyday

[ill bill]

Originally Posted by pigninja

Studios? Shut the fuck up, you're too busy dreaming and not busy enough making quality music. I know studio quality rhymes when I hear them. One person I know of, myself, has that ability. You do not, so don't clame fame to something you don't got bro. I see through you like I see through saranrap, in fact, that's what I'm going to call you from now on, saranrap..because you're see through like clear plastic. If I spit something once, whether it's a demo or not, it sounds way better then anything you'll ever create. Funny thing is, freestyle or no freestyle, it's obvious to me you lack rhythm. There wasn't a single word on your freestyle that hit the beat, and you know it. I'm sure you know enough about music to know I'm the real deal, and in your heart, you know you're just a wannabe. It's hard to face I understand, but trust me, you know, so give up the act. Listen I'll take 2 minutes and write something for you just to show you how it's done.

this kid saranrap thinks he can spit
but this kid saranraps equipped with a clit
he walks around parading his dick
but the truth is he recieves
this *****s more bitch then a bitch
if you don't get the reference
go listen to real shit
cause I got the medal and the pendant
even though I'm half asleep
I can still respond to the beef
it's late on the east coast
but I can still smell a fish
and you got pussy all over your lips
so quit eating your own genitalia
your clits probably sore
cocks impale ya
cause you just a whore
if you ever went to prison
you'd be someones sweety
cause you just a pussy cat
i fly high like i'm tweety
suckerin suckotage!
this is probably the weakest flow
that i've ever written
but you sit down to piss ho
i only sit when i'm shittin
so shut your trap quick
before you get smacked like a bitch
you keep running your mouth
but you can't seem to back it up
unless someones dicks out
cause then you eat that shit up

toker i got you son fuck this cat

yes we get ya reference, but thats not what we stressin
its ya sexual preference, we question, like you on the cover of essence,
this new-dude-testin? he betta, re-view-lessons,
cause goin against me, only leads-to-heaven,
or hell
my presence itself, thats a threat to ya health,
got my rhymes on ya mind then i betcha ya melt,
and me? ima catcher myself,
pitch me the package ill get masses of wealth,
you half-asleep? we on the creep, and we clappin in stealth
potato on the pistol extra mag on my belt,
the way you talk about dicks, you probably a faggot ya self