falling rain

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  1. #1 dirtydingusus, Nov 19, 2009
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    something i wrote- not really a song but ....


    falling rain-
    sitting in the dark
    on a broken chair
    watching the rain fall
    listening to the sky let lose her tears
    giving her a shoulder to cry on
    i wipe her tears from my face
    and we go on together in spite of them all
    when the world has turned its back on her
    she knows she still fills my dreams
     
  2. #2 dirtydingusus, Nov 20, 2009
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    random-
    there is a place

    where the water runs deep

    like a well to my very soul

    to search the darkest crevas

    to seek the longing fear

    time

    creation is but a mith

    derived from the need to prove existence

    for if we were created

    than we must exist?

    how many of you believe you exist

    yet claim to have no faith?
     
  3. nice lyrics man writing music is a good way to express yourself keep up the good work
     
  4. #4 dirtydingusus, Nov 20, 2009
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    thanks i got a ton more -
    the first one i wrote a cupple weeks ago the second one was about 12 yrs ago?

    this one was probably 7 or 8 yrs ago-

    falling back thru vivid water

    sinking deap in memory's void

    wandering the paths i knew so well

    riding the rides

    remembering the gags

    childhood nightmares slowly begin

    dark flashes

    cold sweat

    screams fill the air

    blood runs across the moon

    the heavy sent of dead fish and salt

    slowly overtaken by the smell of her hair

    the screams fade out

    as her soft deep voice soothes across my sole

    words of comfort in an unrightable language

    and the sun rises and the clouds go lite

    as her smile renews my life
     
  5. sick shit throw a few more up there i always like reading poetry, seeing a theme of water lol
     
  6. #6 dirtydingusus, Nov 20, 2009
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    drips-




    sometimes it seams im drifting

    a leaf blown from an anchant tree

    sorrow fills the air with melody

    soft and sweet

    the ground below is jagged

    waiting to rip and tear away

    freedom is drifting high and far away

    exploration is knowledge gained each passing day

    and a faucet inside my mind

    drips my life away





    that one i think is in the area of 5 yrs ago
     
  7. #7 dirtydingusus, Nov 20, 2009
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    yes i suppose there is that isn't there-


    \t
    just shit-



    sometimes i remember

    sometimes i forget

    the shit keeps piling up

    and it never goes away

    tear it off



    will the kids weather the storm?

    what do the people around me realy think of me

    what will my seeds grow into

    what my children will become

    is always on my mind



    where am i going

    where do i want to go



    this is not the dream

    this is us waiting for the dream to come





    how did i get here

    falling off the edge of my life...



    id say 2 yrs ago
     
  8. good stuff
     

  9. thank you!
     
  10. Your writings create clear visuals and understandings, I dig it.
     
  11. thank you!


    when i wright i just kinda try and ride an idea or thought and describe what i see along the way....
     
  12. often when i try and describe what i think or feel about a time or place in my life to another person...it will come out like this....






    Like the moon, dragging in and driving out the tide, this life pushes and pulls me where ever I am meant to go....Im just along for the ride...

    Sometimes the rain she brings me a comfort that nothing elts can...she alone truly knows my pain..
    I sit and watch the sky and pray to feel just one drop....

    It hasnt rained in some time and I feel it in my soul....
    Something is missing, its all so dry...
    The stones in the creek bed are dying of thirst...


    There are clouds now in the distance.
    I feel them drawing near...

    They call to me in my dreams...
    Oh to see them fill the sky...
    To feel them soak the earth...
    I can taste the water in the air...

    Please let it rain!



    So tell me.....anyone have any idea what im really saying here?
    or is this just a nice way of keeping shit to myself....wile making it look as if I am revealing something to someone...who likely will never get what I really meant anyway....
     
  13. #13 dirtydingusus, Mar 17, 2011
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    it 7pm and im losing my fucking mind!

    --------------------------------------------------------
    [ame]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=scMDw9sqM7Y[/ame]
     
  14. #14 dirtydingusus, Mar 19, 2011
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    just whats stuck in my head today----



    [ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-1vUnz6Ub0Q]YouTube - Peter & Wendy - I'll Keep Your Secrets[/ame]



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  15. [ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hMrezs2Bgek]YouTube - 13 Angels - Corrosion of Conformity[/ame]
     
  16. CoC, good stuff right there.
     
  17. today is one of those days
    it feels like it is all coming apart at the seams......
    the smells are all wrong.....
    none of the feelings are in exactly the right place...
    everything is off....
    shifted out of place
    shaken lose

    wires are frayed
    floors out of level
    steps that take too long

    everything feels burn along the edges

    today is one of those days .....
    a day to wonder off .....and stay lost......
     




  18. [ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vYM8IjodDMs&feature=BF&list=PL92892A7391674CCA&index=1]YouTube - Damned For All Time - Corrosion of Conformity[/ame]
    [ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SnhKHChsQwo]YouTube - Corrosion of Conformity - 3) Dance of the Dead[/ame]
    [ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LnyPCVF6l5k&feature=BF&list=PL6E61E5AAF4A11BA9&index=24]YouTube - 4. Buried[/ame]

    [ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vXI4ttpawn8&feature=BF&list=PL6E61E5AAF4A11BA9&index=26]YouTube - Corrosion of Conformity - 5) Break the Circle[/ame]

    [ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3T3w2LpLhaE&playnext=1&list=PL6E61E5AAF4A11BA9]YouTube - Corrosion of Conformity - 6) Painted Smiling Face[/ame]
    [ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hJwEsf-swj8&feature=BF&list=PL6E61E5AAF4A11BA9&index=28]YouTube - Corrosion of Conformity - 7) Mine Are the Eyes of God[/ame]
    [ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R48wZq1Q-GM&feature=BF&list=PL6E61E5AAF4A11BA9&index=29]YouTube - Corrosion of Conformity - 8),9) Shallow Ground, Vote With A Bullet[/ame]
    [ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=87KA3bpkHLQ]YouTube - Corrosion of Conformity - 10) Great Purification[/ame] [ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JQi-tibNpe8&feature=related]YouTube - Corrosion of Conformity - 11) White Noise[/ame]
    [ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j2Iswwpvsdo]YouTube - Corrosion of Conformity - 12) Echoes in the Well[/ame]
    [ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E7m5fbjU-g4&feature=mr_meh&list=PL92892A7391674CCA&index=11&playnext=0]YouTube - 13. ...Remain[/ame]
     
  19. #19 dirtydingusus, Mar 21, 2011
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    sometimes all my life dissolves into music -
    yesterday it was warm and sunny....
    and beautiful outside
    almost all the snow was gone
    buds on all the trees and the blueberry bushes

    [ame]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TWXWSZ6w2uI[/ame]


    but this am ....the world is once again encased in ice....

    [ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1vHRwmFc-1o]YouTube - Trans-Siberian Orchestra - Christmas Eve Sarajevo Live[/ame]
     
  20. everywhere i look everyone is talking about war and the end of the world

    [ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6csT5CPWOl0&feature=related]YouTube - GWAR-A Short History Of The End Of The World[/ame]
     

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