rap battle me. haha.

[TheFxckingHero]

I just wrote this and wanted to share, because it owns.

ignite the widow, fire white, burn bright, smoke stoned height, float, riiiight? that cryptic chronic, robotic bionic flow, electronic sonic, go -- stop. breathe. iron lungs and thc, a catalyst for creativity settin' me free... a glimpse of reality the way it was meant to be -- stop. breathe. open up your mind and perceive. deceive the body and flee. disease-ridden vision retreat, revealin' what the eyes can't see - cerebral clarity.

I know somebody will battle me. let's go.

hah

[mike59271]

aiight man i got some stuff

i just wrote this for now


the biggest secret to dismantle your state of mind
locked up, in this box of thoughts defined
combined, intertwined my esteem had once declined
but watch your back, cuz now the planets are aligned

are ya disinclined? i redifine all preconsieved notions
no need for the motions, they require emotions
im concerned with present bitch, here and now
so bow, turn around ill eat ya out like puppy chow



this is another rap ive writeen previously

I transcend the fabric of both time and space
Regress ya with my powers to the Mongoloid race
To a much lower place of knowledge base, erase
Liability case, this aint no master race

My words are like addin fuel to the fuckin fire
Like intangible conductor wire, somethin ya desire
See ya couldn’t even hope to immitate, sublimate, venerate
Just generate hate, cuz ya can’t alleviate

My only goal, to overthrow military control
Ill fight with all I got, body and soul
I wont show self control, fuck no, ill play my role
Bitch, ill turn ya into a fuckin arthritic mole

My words bring tears to powering oppressors
Im the aggressor, I kill their lines, no successors
Like a taxassesors I apply painful pressure
The lyrics I spit couldn’t be any fresher

my profetic electromagnetic anestetic
unsympathetic genetics are hardly apologetic
my phonetics on thier own cause kenetic prostetics
all because im the prodigal poetic apathetic

not to say that im the second commin, but damn
my egos bigger the whole enron scam
BAM! i think im gunna need an oral exam
bangin more than died in the forest of (viet) nam

blinded by a blanket of replete deceit
here to make incomplete wall street elite
im unable to defeat, so ya better retreat
im here till death, disabled the ejection seat

we live under the modified american plan
it started way before the attack by japan
so if cappin a bitch gets me 10 in the can
cappin 10 mill should get you death, mr. government man

[killAss]

that was so FUcking dope

[jtp2007]

That was good. Can you come up with that stuff on the spot? Dont get me wrong, I would battle you but my vocabulary isnt that big. It would take me a long time to think about what I would say. I remember I made a rap about Holden in Catcher In the Rye for school though. It was sick.

Edit: OK I couldnt hold back. I have to let it out. I tried to make it go with the book.

I got blonde hair and I got brown eyes
Gotta watch me as I flip those fries
They go from frozen, to golden
My name is Holden...a.k.a. dropout
Used to go to school until I got kicked out
Missed out on all that learning
Now Im just turning and burning the burgers

Damn, I forget the few lines in here. O, well.

You got me here, standing on thin ice
Next time Ill think twice
Look and listen
Maybe I will make a better decision

[TheFxckingHero]

lol nice, mike.

"my profetic electromagnetic anestetic
unsympathetic genetics are hardly apologetic
my phonetics on thier own cause kenetic prostetics
all because im the prodigal poetic apathetic"

that was the best part. you're not too great at spelling, but your rhymes are awesome.

[TheFxckingHero]

I don't know who you were talking to jtp, but I can't freestyle. I have a deep vocabulary and I'm a good writer, but I need to take my time. haha. the little short thing I had posted at the top I just had one goal, to write about smoking, and that's what I did and it turned out good. :P

[mike59271]

thats tight man, i made a rap for oedipus rex, a novel by aristotle or someone...class loved it, brought me from an F to a D, so i was happy. no i cant come up with stuff like that on the spot, usually takes me about 1-2 hours to come up with somethin like that, i havnt been goin long so im nto that great...but im gettin better

[TheFxckingHero]

yeah, we read that in my humanities class in college. i had trouble staying awake when we watched the play... :/ lol

[Smoken Souljah]

this is more to a raggae tune in my head but.... here goes:

My mind won't believe
Cuz my eyes they deceive
how can, we be, so far from grace
i pray for the day, i may toke anywhere, anytime, any place
free from the fear that i hold deep inside...searching for the lights
that light up(light up, light it up...) in the sky.... the red and the blue, theres no white
at night, the flag that means nothing if yah stand up for yah rights
no justice to be had for the tree burning nation, ya gotta take it in stride
and light up with determination....


... i dunno if any1 will catch on the tune in my head.... but yah... thats my thing...

[Smoken Souljah]

wow did mine just that bad? enough to just completely annhilate this thread..... haha...... uhhh... nice?

[TheFxckingHero]

lol nahh. i'll revive the stoned rhyme battle thread.



bump bump.

[KeepSmokinReefa]

This is my drunk freestyle
Im bout to go wild

Twistin blunts full of herb,
Smokin on the curb,

Im to high to be violent
Im ready to be silent

Relax and chill
Enjoy how ya feel

'Thas jus my intro,
But yall cant hear the instrumental'



Grab a gun and throw it at you,
Jus to see what you'll do,
Your nothin in this game, Your new,
Tryin to play me like a foo,

I dont play around,
Ill put you underground,

6 feet deep,
Watch me creep,

We from Detroit City,
Not a bitch like fitty,

Ill blow a nukkas head off,
With the stolen sawed off,
Watch the blood as he cough,
Heh, He thought we was tough.



Aight thats it, Im drunk, Im high. No idea if this is good or fuckin horrible. Too drunk to know. Jus shit off the top of my head and drunk so i didnt even read it over. Jus straight raw drunk freestyle.

[dhoyda]

yo yo yo I'm looking for a dime
that's top of the line
cute face little waste with a big behind
I need a dime, that's top of the line...............

lol...Mike Jones.......Ying Yang Twins

[TheFxckingHero]

gross. don't quote that trash in my thread.


down with mtv hip pop.

[Smoken Souljah]

ey yo..... yo..... check it.....


"milk... milk.... milk milk chicken.... chicken chicken milk, milk chicken milk, chicken chicken chicken.... milk milk milk... milk, chicken, chicken, chicken, milk milk, chicken, milk chicken!"



honest to god story..... my friends brother.... at his church talent show when he was younger.... went up on stage and did a "rap", that was 6 minutes long.. using only 2 words... milk.... and chicken....... hahaha