Motion Vs. Venomous Puffer

[motion]

Vote for who you think won this battle. Vote while you can, the poll closes soon

There wasn't a 3 vote stop counter, so I made it so the polls will close in exactly 24 hours.

Round 1

Originally Posted by Venomous Puffer

Im becoming a legend and im gonna be remembered
For my brilliant lyrics that I constantly render
Scientists have determined my rhymes are infinite
Cause to be specific, they’re carved in ancient hieroglyphics
Let my words be heard all the way across the land
Travel through the forests and sands to reach each of my fans
This is my only chance to stand up and take the fame
So im doin it and im shootin with precision aim
I don’t fumble with words and I got perfect concentration
My words are creative and all of my rhymes are innovative
When I stop spitten fire itll leave you torched and blacked
Forcing you to receive a full body skin graft
If you piss me off im the type of kid that would pull you off
Of life support until your pulse comes to a stop
Put your guard down for a second and ill snap
Like a steel reinforced, barbed wire trap
The state has issued a warrant to come out and find me
That’s why theres special op, agents and cops behind me
I lead them to a house that ill later set on fire
Survivors will be choked with deadly metal wires

Originally Posted by motion

I think ya have been listening to too much Immortal Technique,
All you got is a big mouth, similar to a bird with a beak.
All I hear is gibberish, its annoying like a facet with a leak.
Greek.... salad is what your about to be,
Chop ya up, toss ya, it's what ya get for messin with me.
You'll just stand there motionless like a tree.
The fact that your nervous now isn't a lie,
You're sweating like your about to be drove by,
I'll give ya the benefit of the doubt, maybe your shy.
Whatever it is, know that your going against me,
The last fool I battled deleted all his posts on GC.

Round 2

Originally Posted by Venomous Puffer

Motion your lines remind me of retarded kids
That snort coke till they’re eyes roll back in their eye lids
And then decide that they randomly wanna rhyme and spit
Some incoherent irrelevant babbling shit
see its people like you who give rap a bad name
you think your gonna win this? you gotta be insane
your lame, rhymes are dull, your style is the same
as every other inexperienced bitch in this rap game
Your tame compared to me ill unleash the beast
inside of me and now its hungry and your the feast
Your weak, pathetic lines, your an ameature at best
Il lay you to rest and continue to flow even after your death

Originally Posted by motion

You really need to elevate,
Ya aint spitting shit but some random hate.
The rhymes you spit are older than Alexander the Great.
Your rhyme scheme is far too simple,
In an ocean of waves, ya ass is simply a ripple.
All I hear is a bunch of squels similar to a pig,
You've won as many battles as the number of bowls in ya sig.
Why do the bongs even have 2 bowls? I dont know,
My guess is 1 for you, and 1 for your nasty ass hoe.

Round 3

Originally Posted by Venomous Puffer

Whys ya name motion you aint goin no where
Your carear isnt advancing but shit i dont care
Refusing to bow to me? You know that you wouldnt dare
Even ya moms on her knees so i can bust in her hair
Some say i work hard and others just say that im blessed
but one things for sure, fuck with me and ull be in cardiac arrest
And if you try to step up to me...ya you guessed
ull die quicker than a hemophiliac bleeding out his chest
Insulting my sig thats about as dumb as it gets
Ill spaz u out worse than epileptic seizures and fits
when you said one bowl was for my ho did u mean my spouse?
cause it was actually your bitch that was over at my house

Originally Posted by motion

You're really scaring me, with all those threats,
Time to take off the training wheels, no mo saftey net,
You're rhymes are fruitier than grapfruit kush,
You tell more lies than George Bush.
Duct tape ya lips, cuz ya needa shush.
I've won as many battles as my rims have spokes,
You admitted you were whack with the yo mama jokes.
That's about the easiest thing to spit,
I'll say your good just so you dont throw a fit.
Whining and crying is your game,
Nice try on dissing my name...
That shit put you straight to shame.

[motion]

Let the games begin. It would be nice too also include WHY you voted for that person.

[Venomous Puffer]

motion u voted for yourself right? cause i voted for me and i did that cause i like my rhymes

[motion]

Originally Posted by Venomous Puffer

motion u voted for yourself right? cause i voted for me and i did that cause i like my rhymes

Lol yeah, I did too. I voted for me because I liked my rhymes, aswell.

Wow. Thanks, guys. I appreciate how I'm not part of this. People should be able to vote for me too!! I contributed!!
Rofl.
But seriously, I voted for Motion. His stuff's good, catchy, different..i like it.
But other guy- you were good too.

[hippycracker]

First of all +rep to you both, thats totally....DAMN..nice guys. Thats talent right there.

It was a hard choice but Im going to have to go with Venomous reason being is that for me, his just flowed better.

[motion]

Thanks everybody for the kind words. Keep the votes coming regardless of who it's for.

[Venomous Puffer]

yea, thank you for the compliments and votes this is fun to see different peoples opinions on this and the poll results are tied at the moment this is gonna be a close battle i think it would go either way at this point itll be interresting to see the results in 24 hrs

[XVIPimp]

I voted for Venemous

His wordplay was a lot better, that's why I voted for him

Good job to both of you though, a lot better than I could do.

[motion]

Originally Posted by XVIPimp

His wordplay was a lot better, that's why I voted for him

Agree'd. I need to work on that.

[DCrist721]

It was really close for me, I was like damn when motion made the 2 bowl comment, and almost voted for him, but then when puffer came back with "when you said one bowl was for my ho did u mean my spouse?
cause it was actually your bitch that was over at my house" I had to go with him. +rep for you both though, nice rhymes.

[Venomous Puffer]

thank you pimp and dcrist for your votes and for the reps glad you guys liked the battle

[sloppyjoe]

I think your both whack so I voted for me
there can only be one real champ of GC
You both got flow and thats all good,
but keep that shit in suburbia, cause it won't fly in da hood
I'll be easy for now, until you really want it
but I tell you this when it comes you won't live.
I'll rip through those lines like frieght train son!
Its like you walked up to a train fight with just a gun
I'm monumental and the rhymes I choose
will leave you on the streets bummin change and drinkin booze.
That lame ass poetry might fly with the girls
but you gotta pull it up a notch, to hang with what I hurl
These fastball flows leavin you and your hoes on your toes.
Now I gotta go until the next tyme that we flow, bet you'll bring the a game fo sho. JOE>


P.S. I cannot rap but that was pretty fun , I have to say , though I did not vote, they were both very good.

[chronictoker]

I wanna see a round 2, where you guys send in video haha. cuz anybody can internet rap. i wanna see who's really got that talent. that was a pretty good battle though you guys. i guess it'll have to do.

[Rasta_Man]

I can't choose between my boys!