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15 | 48.39% |
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16 | 51.61% |
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louie armstrong
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me motion what a ***** cant get into it?> iight then not my fault i havnt been able to FUCK you up on yahoo
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louie armstrong
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iight then motion
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I'm an Erbolist.
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: SOUTH FL
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ight...a complete breakdown.. trust me.. i know what im talking about.. i've rapped for 6+ yrs (including 4 yrs of internet battling --text)..
ROUND 1 - VENOMOUS PUFFER... he had the only bar that i liked outta the whole 1st rd. ROUND 2 - VENOMOUS PUFFER... came with a nice hard hitting verse. ROUND 3 - MOTION BEST BARS FROM RD. 1: If you piss me off im the type of kid that would pull you off Of life support until your pulse comes to a stop -Venomous Puffer RD 1: VP, were the punches? ...or atleast dissing? u had one bar i liked, very creative.. had a killer flow to it.. i like that bro.... motion: ur verse wasnt hard hittin.... and weres the complexity? BEST BARS FROM RD. 2: Motion your lines remind me of retarded kids That snort coke till they’re eyes roll back in their eye lids And then decide that they randomly wanna rhyme and spit Some incoherent irrelevant babbling shit -Venomous Puffer RD 2: VP, MUCH better verse than ur last one.. i like this one alot.. rhyme scheme is nice.. u came off good from the start and continued thru-out the whole verse..... motion: Your rhyme scheme is far too simple,.... LOL!!! how ironic (no pun intended)BEST BARS FROM RD. 3: Whys ya name motion you aint goin no where -Venomous Puffer You're rhymes are fruitier than grapfruit kush, -motion... LOL, that line ahd me laughin You admitted you were whack with the yo mama jokes. -motion RD 3: motion had better lines.. rhyme scheme was still simple thou nonetheless... VP, u definately toned it down in this verse.. u came off wit a nice opener, but dropped from there SIDE NOTES: motion u needa work on ur rhyme scheme.. tis too simple.. try to add more complexity... add more multis and punches too (same with VP as far as the M&Punches go)... multis will REALLY help ur flow....and with enuff hardhitting punchlines, you'll win a battle wit ease
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