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| Sexy Poetry Devil Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: there's no time in this place
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Ruse, the great saviour of this hallowed haiku thread everybody dies.
__________________ I been fettered and I been free, boys I been fed up with what's expected of me, boys it's my damn own fault now, innit, aye, boys? yeah, jerusalem, boys. My writing |
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| You're not the chosen one Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: 4200 Super Moderator Blvd., Grasscity Pennsylvania, 17420
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S'not a real haiku if you're just counting sylla- bles. Try it again.
__________________ Now baby, baby, baby this world must seem so immense compared to the womb and baby, baby, baby your head must seem so much smaller than you assumed the whole world seems to center around you it'd be easy to make the mistake that maybe you're why the world was made |
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| Sexy Poetry Devil Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: there's no time in this place
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thank you Hempress, but nature's only existant, makes for boring poems
__________________ I been fettered and I been free, boys I been fed up with what's expected of me, boys it's my damn own fault now, innit, aye, boys? yeah, jerusalem, boys. My writing |
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| Sexy Poetry Devil Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: there's no time in this place
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ecstacy, my love you make the world amazing but mostly my hair
__________________ I been fettered and I been free, boys I been fed up with what's expected of me, boys it's my damn own fault now, innit, aye, boys? yeah, jerusalem, boys. My writing |
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| You're not the chosen one Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: 4200 Super Moderator Blvd., Grasscity Pennsylvania, 17420
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I like that one, Rocky. It made me chuckle a bit.
__________________ Now baby, baby, baby this world must seem so immense compared to the womb and baby, baby, baby your head must seem so much smaller than you assumed the whole world seems to center around you it'd be easy to make the mistake that maybe you're why the world was made |
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| Sexy Poetry Devil Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: there's no time in this place
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haha, good to see you back Suburban.
__________________ I been fettered and I been free, boys I been fed up with what's expected of me, boys it's my damn own fault now, innit, aye, boys? yeah, jerusalem, boys. My writing |
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| I am not a concept Join Date: May 2003
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There is no me, fool Just you seeing me through eyes Two bias screened windows
__________________ "Stay committed to your decisions, but stay flexible in your approach." - Tom Robbins My Sketchbook Anyone Reading Good Books? |
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