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Old 06-10-2007, 05:32 PM
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Ruse, the great saviour
of this hallowed haiku thread
everybody dies.
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I been fettered and I been free, boys
I been fed up with what's expected of me, boys
it's my damn own fault now, innit, aye, boys?
yeah, jerusalem, boys.


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Old 06-10-2007, 05:46 PM
You're not the chosen one
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S'not a real haiku
if you're just counting sylla-
bles. Try it again.

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Now baby, baby, baby this world must seem so immense compared to the womb
and baby, baby, baby your head must seem so much smaller than you assumed
the whole world seems to center around you
it'd be easy to make the mistake
that maybe you're why the world was made
 
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Old 06-10-2007, 07:09 PM
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thank you Hempress, but
nature's only existant,
makes for boring poems
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Old 06-14-2007, 03:41 AM
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Ocean's pounding waves,
wash all the nutrients from
glittering beach sand

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Old 06-15-2007, 08:21 PM
10-4, What's your 20?
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out on work furlough
i live at the fucking jail
only four months left
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Old 06-24-2007, 09:04 AM
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ecstacy, my love
you make the world amazing
but mostly my hair
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I been fed up with what's expected of me, boys
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Old 06-24-2007, 09:23 AM
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one i made on a whim some time ago:

it's easy enough
greasing gears for smooth living,
but fuck, oil is gross.
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Old 06-24-2007, 02:42 PM
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I like that one, Rocky. It made me chuckle a bit.
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Old 06-24-2007, 04:12 PM
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Smoke crack all day long
Heart beatin hard like ping pong
Sing song, felaphal

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Old 06-24-2007, 07:18 PM
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haha, good to see you back Suburban.
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Old 06-24-2007, 07:32 PM
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haha, good to see you back Suburban.
Yeah boy.
 
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Old 07-05-2007, 07:52 AM
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some nights in my dreams
I fall in love or come close.
last night i got shot.

true story
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Old 07-07-2007, 05:09 AM
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the janes in my lungs
free as a song in the air
is this the answer?
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Old 07-07-2007, 05:42 AM
I am not a concept
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There is no me, fool
Just you seeing me through eyes
Two bias screened windows
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Anyone Reading Good Books?
 
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Old 07-07-2007, 06:06 PM
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You make me not for
I fly freely high here me
See or not, you clod
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