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Old 01-31-2007, 06:42 PM
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that haiku is great
the one just above this one
this one kinda sucks
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I been fed up with what's expected of me, boys
it's my damn own fault now, innit, aye, boys?
yeah, jerusalem, boys.


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Old 02-01-2007, 12:31 AM
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"Call me spinal tap
Try to break out cha girls back
Come back like good crack"




that was the best one
 
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Old 02-03-2007, 06:07 PM
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no one likes this thread
not anymore, anyway
fuck it, I'ma blaze
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I been fed up with what's expected of me, boys
it's my damn own fault now, innit, aye, boys?
yeah, jerusalem, boys.


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Old 02-03-2007, 08:08 PM
wake up
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hah, silly stoners!
they're trying to be clever,
but their words are weak.

oh blaze this, blaze that
just because you like to smoke
rep herb in haiku...

what about the dew
that grasps the grass with longing
'fore it's dropped below

or the backs of slaves
wretched and twisted in pain
no one cries for them

you pretentious youths
practice won't make you better
(that includes me too)

*cough*
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Old 02-03-2007, 08:52 PM
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Palmer thinks he's sweet
but I guess he doesn't know
haikus are for fags


I just remembered
that I made this fucking thread
oh sweet irony
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I been fed up with what's expected of me, boys
it's my damn own fault now, innit, aye, boys?
yeah, jerusalem, boys.


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Old 02-03-2007, 08:58 PM
wake up
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if I'm a critic
I must speak in the format
of those criticized

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Old 02-03-2007, 09:08 PM
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good thing you are not
criticizing animals
or Helen Keller
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I been fed up with what's expected of me, boys
it's my damn own fault now, innit, aye, boys?
yeah, jerusalem, boys.


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Old 02-03-2007, 09:13 PM
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ha ha haha ha
hehehe heh haha he
hahahahaha
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Old 02-03-2007, 10:59 PM
10-4, What's your 20?
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man thats despirate
you cant think of nothin good
well i cant either


just ordered pizza
had it delivered to me
large pan meat lovers

tastes so fuckin good
havent had any cash lately
so i eat ramen

im sick of noodles
pizza is so much better
and a mountain dew

listening to tunes
i feel so relaxed right now
just a little buzzed

on my last three bowls
will need to quit for a while
my girl dont like it

but its for love so,
i will do it for her sake
plus ill have her here

anyways you guys,
when you are stoned, these haikus,
they are addicting
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Old 02-04-2007, 09:59 AM
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eight minutes to go
four-twenty is a'commin
blaze blaze blaze blaze blaze
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I been fed up with what's expected of me, boys
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Old 02-04-2007, 10:43 AM
10-4, What's your 20?
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3 in the AM
not much going on tonight
bout to head to bed


not much tomorrow
super bowl aught to be good
i dont care who wins
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Old 02-05-2007, 08:14 AM
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when day breaks over
my river - god speaks through the
trees with the springs' breeze
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Old 02-06-2007, 09:00 PM
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soda ipods moon,
little racoons, a balloon
lifes weird, so have fear.
 
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Old 02-07-2007, 03:52 AM
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men can be lucky
we get the best counterpart
two tits for one clit
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Old 02-07-2007, 05:24 PM
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sittin at my job
working on the computer
cant wait to go home
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didnt sleep a lot
girls parents being assholes
she not at my house

i tell pops, fuck you
he said he will fuck me up
i called him a bitch

her mom called all night
she hung up when i answer
i turn off ringer

parents dont get it
i will be victorious
im invincible
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