My sketchbook comments/criticisms welcome

.ViciouS. · #1 (**permalink**) 09-07-2006, 09:23 AM

If you've come here for beauty, may you find it
If you've come here to seek peace, may peace find you
If you've come here to blast me, hells yea!

yea anyways, i'll be posting most of my shit from my sketchbook and other random stuff in here.. sorry if any of the ugly materials you're about to see offends you, i swear i didn't do it on purpose.

and forgive me for a lot of the smeerage because my sketchbook sucks.

i should be drawing lots more shits to come, atleast that is my intention. hopefully you will see progress. if not, then flame me

.ViciouS. · #2 (**permalink**) 09-07-2006, 09:26 AM

Palmer Eldritch · #3 (**permalink**) 09-07-2006, 06:05 PM

ahh yes, I think ive seen some of these before. looks like you've got the same problem as I when it comes to abstract: we can't stick with a single cohesive pattern. A lot of the individual elements are really cool but it just doesn't come together like we planned

You're topmost portrait is still my favorite

glass_girl420 · #4 (**permalink**) 09-07-2006, 06:18 PM

I like most of them, the ones with more details. You did wonderful with the girls, great talent vicious.

sheeps101 · #5 (**permalink**) 09-07-2006, 10:15 PM

I liked the first the best, but all showed talent. Keep it up man.

SpringsStang · #6 (**permalink**) 09-08-2006, 01:01 AM

nice work dude!

.ViciouS. · #7 (**permalink**) 09-08-2006, 10:03 AM

Thanks for the comments and encouragement, I definitly appreciate them. most of those works are old when I was more into abstract stuff, mostly because I suck(ed) at drawing.

I will be posting new shits, for real, they are shit. The things I will be posting will probably be very ugly, but I am kind of "starting over" and trying to go in a new direction. Right now working on quick sketches. Hopefully see new posts just about everyday.

Damn i want to hurl after looking at some of these.
With References:

No Reference:

as you can see, i have a lot to work on

smoke__aLot!!! · #8 (**permalink**) 09-11-2006, 12:43 AM

Super Good sketchs man! + rep

Iggy · #9 (**permalink**) 09-11-2006, 01:38 AM

your work shows potential and with some instruction could probably take off and really get good. Keep up the good work and I'd recommend focusing on your realistic work such as the portraits as those are what show your true ability.

With your abstracts pay more attention to the overall flow and feel of a design rather than individual pieces...yes the parts and pieces are important but if the piece doesn't flow then your left with nothing more than a detailed mess.

All in all keep at it. You've got potential.

cocoa · #10 (**permalink**) 09-11-2006, 01:59 AM

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Originally Posted by .ViciouS.

i like that one a whole lot

br3ad_ · #11 (**permalink**) 09-11-2006, 05:34 AM

Wow, very nice man.

Draconian · #12 (**permalink**) 09-11-2006, 04:55 PM

These drawings are amazing. .ViciouS., you got some talent man.

420TheCollector · #13 (**permalink**) 09-11-2006, 05:01 PM

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Originally Posted by .ViciouS.

I like this one, pretty twisted

Great work man!

Draconian · #14 (**permalink**) 09-11-2006, 05:21 PM

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Originally Posted by 420TheCollector

I like this one, pretty twisted

Great work man!

That's another one I really like.

.ViciouS. · #15 (**permalink**) 09-11-2006, 05:41 PM

Thanks guys I really appreciate the comments! I've been lazy past few days but I swear I will have some more work coming soon.

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#1 (permalink) 09-07-2006, 09:23 AM
.ViciouS. I am not a concept Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 1,119	My sketchbook comments/criticisms welcome If you've come here for beauty, may you find it If you've come here to seek peace, may peace find you If you've come here to blast me, hells yea! yea anyways, i'll be posting most of my shit from my sketchbook and other random stuff in here.. sorry if any of the ugly materials you're about to see offends you, i swear i didn't do it on purpose. and forgive me for a lot of the smeerage because my sketchbook sucks. i should be drawing lots more shits to come, atleast that is my intention. hopefully you will see progress. if not, then flame me __________________ "Stay committed to your decisions, but stay flexible in your approach." - Tom Robbins My Sketchbook Anyone Reading Good Books? Last edited by .ViciouS.; 09-07-2006 at 09:27 AM.

#2 (permalink) 09-07-2006, 09:26 AM
.ViciouS. I am not a concept Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 1,119	__________________ "Stay committed to your decisions, but stay flexible in your approach." - Tom Robbins My Sketchbook Anyone Reading Good Books?

#3 (permalink) 09-07-2006, 06:05 PM
Palmer Eldritch wake up Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Prox Posts: 2,669	ahh yes, I think ive seen some of these before. looks like you've got the same problem as I when it comes to abstract: we can't stick with a single cohesive pattern. A lot of the individual elements are really cool but it just doesn't come together like we planned You're topmost portrait is still my favorite __________________

#4 (permalink) 09-07-2006, 06:18 PM
glass_girl420 puff puff pass Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: New Brunswick Posts: 957	I like most of them, the ones with more details. You did wonderful with the girls, great talent vicious. __________________ "There are many things you can do with a sword, sitting on it isn't one."-Yevgeny Zamyatin

#5 (permalink) 09-07-2006, 10:15 PM
sheeps101 Strictly Aim. Join Date: May 2005 Location: Jersey Posts: 773	I liked the first the best, but all showed talent. Keep it up man. __________________ You gotta survive, no matter the pain /\/igga be hurting, life'll be hurting But /\/igga for certain, this is the game

#6 (permalink) 09-08-2006, 01:01 AM
SpringsStang Registered User Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Colorado Springs Posts: 551	nice work dude! __________________ 1. Signature Limits: All signatures should not exceed the following size limits, and you can't have both text and images. Text Signatures: 4 lines normal size OR 8 lines small size and up to 90 chars per line. Font sizes above 2 are not allowed. For images in signatures: 1 image up to 300 pixels wide, 125 pixels tall and 20k in size.

#7 (permalink) 09-08-2006, 10:03 AM
.ViciouS. I am not a concept Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 1,119	Thanks for the comments and encouragement, I definitly appreciate them. most of those works are old when I was more into abstract stuff, mostly because I suck(ed) at drawing. I will be posting new shits, for real, they are shit. The things I will be posting will probably be very ugly, but I am kind of "starting over" and trying to go in a new direction. Right now working on quick sketches. Hopefully see new posts just about everyday. Damn i want to hurl after looking at some of these. With References: No Reference: as you can see, i have a lot to work on __________________ "Stay committed to your decisions, but stay flexible in your approach." - Tom Robbins My Sketchbook Anyone Reading Good Books?

#8 (permalink) 09-11-2006, 12:43 AM
smoke__aLot!!! Pyschic Spy From China Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: 49548 Posts: 1,526	Super Good sketchs man! + rep __________________ JOIN GC GEEKS Click Here Before Hitting Submit! Ethical Hacker

#9 (permalink) 09-11-2006, 01:38 AM
Iggy I only trust smokers Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: US Posts: 21	your work shows potential and with some instruction could probably take off and really get good. Keep up the good work and I'd recommend focusing on your realistic work such as the portraits as those are what show your true ability. With your abstracts pay more attention to the overall flow and feel of a design rather than individual pieces...yes the parts and pieces are important but if the piece doesn't flow then your left with nothing more than a detailed mess. All in all keep at it. You've got potential. __________________ This site has already paid for a bag of wonderful bud.

#11 (permalink) 09-11-2006, 05:34 AM
br3ad_ <-KiNg-> Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Hamilton, Ontario 9-Oh-5 Posts: 5,357	Wow, very nice man. __________________

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#12 (permalink) 09-11-2006, 04:55 PM
Draconian Nihilistic Mystic Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Toronto, Canada Posts: 505	These drawings are amazing. .ViciouS., you got some talent man. __________________

#15 (permalink) 09-11-2006, 05:41 PM
.ViciouS. I am not a concept Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 1,119	Thanks guys I really appreciate the comments! I've been lazy past few days but I swear I will have some more work coming soon. __________________ "Stay committed to your decisions, but stay flexible in your approach." - Tom Robbins My Sketchbook Anyone Reading Good Books?