2 Love Poems

[Blazin Jamaican]

K well I wrote a lot of poems when i was incarcerated but I only got these 2 i need to get the others from my personals go pick them up this week. There love poems that I wanted to sing to some females or something. Sold these for cakes in there for guys to write to their girlfriends $$$$.

Title: That Special Summer

A summer beneath the moonlight
A summer beneath the trees
A summer filled with sunsets
A Summer of you and me
A summer filled with fire flies
Dancing across the sky
A summer filled with love and passion
That will never die
A summer of your beauty
Loving teenaged mentality
The summer we escaped from prison
The prison of reality
Staying up late and expressing our love
Became our only desire
Watching the sun
Set on the horizon
Sparking a beautiful fire
Silent conversations
Which words didnt need to be said
Gazing into each other's eyes
Took their place instead
A summer in which our candle of love
Burned brightly in the dark
The summer when you gave the key
That would unlock your heart
As months passed, summer left
And the season changed
But the love that burned in our hearts
Was there and would always remain



Title: An Ode to a Girl of Beauty

A face of trust and loyalty
Never telling lies
Shades of gold run through her hair
Down to her silencing eyes
Muted calls of hopes and dreams
Are seen within her expression
Sun kissed skin dipped in honey
Make up her light brown complexion
Internal feeling of admiration
Are exposed across my face
The song she sings
Takes it effect
And slowly gnaws away at my hate
Her heavenly voice
Runs through my ears
Clensing me of sin
But when she stops
I feel so empty
For I will never see her again...

[yep thats me]

great job i really like the both of them! i loved how who described the girls' complexion as "sun kissed skin dipped in honey" that was nice. kepp them coming man.

[Maitereya]

wow those are really good. i would not expect someone in jail to write something like that. lol u sold em for cakes thats funny.

[Blazin Jamaican]

Originally Posted by Maitereya

wow those are really good. i would not expect someone in jail to write something like that. lol u sold em for cakes thats funny.

yeah well i rap too but im kinda slowing down on that and getting more into poetry. lolz and yeah i sold them for cakes. coffee cakes to be exact $$$