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Old 06-24-2006, 11:03 PM
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Do you? A poem.

Do you question man’s desires?
Do you question stone and fire?
What of steel, or drops of rain?
Would you question your own brain?

A common experience, is it shared bliss?
Or is it fake, a huge abyss?
Is all you see, and touch, and hear
The object of one beings’ fear

Or is it simply gods lost toys
A giant schoolyard, for girls and boys
To laugh and play, to hurt and kill
Yet somehow we are living still

Are we a just a jumble of living cells
Or energy? Is this the depths of hell
O’ answer me, if you are there
And if you’re not, should I still care
It hurts to breathe, what is this air
In fact, why do I feel despair

Do you question all you see?
Is what you see, confined to thee?
But what is sight, and what are eyes?
Reality is just a pack of lies
 
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Old 07-01-2006, 11:06 PM
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your poetry is inspiring. i liked it so much, i read it twice
props to you man
 
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Old 07-03-2006, 01:36 AM
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your poetry is inspiring. i liked it so much, i read it twice
props to you man
Well then I read it three times (even though I only read it once)

nice poem
 
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Old 07-04-2006, 04:08 AM
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very nice flow to it.

deep dude. i respect you putting your work on the net for all to see.

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your poetry is inspiring. i liked it so much, i read it twice
props to you man
deep stuff man , and this peice was inspiring , had me thinking whole way through
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Old 07-04-2006, 10:15 PM
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I like the poem, and thanks for sharing it.
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