Poem i wrote

[stbernard808]

"the devil and the prophet"

When the two worlds collide of good and evil

The devil and the prophet meet

And the fire and brimstone start to heat

The battle will be raged

And when both are aged

Nothing will have ever changed

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But who is the one fighting on the side

Of good and what is real

And who is lost in what he has been trying to feel

Who is the one that has the bullshit

And who is the one with the truth?

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Throughout the ages they have fought

Often times more than naught

And all in vein only to cause more pain

Even when there was no right or wrong

All for a new throng

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So when the time comes

Who is there to believe?

Who is the one that is trying to deceive?

The fight of the devil and the prophet

Which side do you get off at?

[chronictoker]

wow thats some deep shit, props to you and all the other artsy people out there. Im glad that the city can allow for such freedom of speech and expression. Id just like to say that this site is awesome, it's by far my favorite place on the net.

[stbernard808]

Originally Posted by chronictoker

wow thats some deep shit, props to you and all the other artsy people out there. Im glad that the city can allow for such freedom of speech and expression. Id just like to say that this site is awesome, it's by far my favorite place on the net.

hey man thanks alot. i got some more but the artists corner doenst get visited to much. im always lookin for opinions though.

[gogo]

nice man!

[Bluntz21]

toooo many words

[Natural Mystic]

Originally Posted by stbernard808

And who is lost in what he has been trying to feel

Wow. Very nice line man, my favorite in your poem. ^^^ Don't listen to this guy and keep writting. Creativity is better than societies productivity.