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med mechanica · #1 (**permalink**) 02-03-2005, 03:43 AM

I wrote this by basically thinking of each word as i wrote the word before it. Oddly enough, it does have a sort of strange meaning to it, but i'll leave it open to interpretation. Enjoy:

The transatlantic algorithms drenched in abyssmal continuity are less in number as the six-eyed falcon parades its glory in a stained-glass symphony. A wrinkle or fold with such a name as bedlam is ignited and spread wingspan and eyelid wide in tumultuous grief. The ends of the snow-black universe are pulled farther away from one-another's gravitational fury, but only the future is bent as the present screams, untampered with. As I sit at my desk among the cloud arches of Sulcecia slums, my calligraphy-birthed ink and green-backed scroll are pulled east, foreshadowing the cataclysmic invasion of once-distant space. But my children's children will observe this transient love letter as I did, like gazing up a ceiling that is bound to fall the moment you leave the room. Remember Lucia.

...yeah i don't know what the fuck "Remember Lucia" means. but uh. i like it.

heat_blitz · #2 (**permalink**) 02-03-2005, 08:28 PM

..that is bound to fall the 'moment'? you leave the room...

I think you missed that word. Nice writing though, I cant exactly understand all of that, let alone come up with an interpretation.

I think the part from "The end of the snow-black universe...." is the better part, mainly because I have no idea what the first part says.

med mechanica · #3 (**permalink**) 02-03-2005, 10:38 PM

ah you're right. fixed.

yeah, i think i started writing with a bit more focus once i got past the first two sentences, but i like them all the same. thanks for the response.

gogo · #4 (**permalink**) 04-19-2005, 01:40 PM

nice experiment

lulubuns · #5 (**permalink**) 04-19-2005, 11:27 PM

very cool!

Natural Mystic · #6 (**permalink**) 04-20-2005, 01:01 AM

Very nice, I really like your style of writting and how everything is so well described!

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#1 (permalink) 02-03-2005, 03:43 AM
med mechanica siguen los cuerpos Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 126	Snow-Black Universe (written while baked) I wrote this by basically thinking of each word as i wrote the word before it. Oddly enough, it does have a sort of strange meaning to it, but i'll leave it open to interpretation. Enjoy: The transatlantic algorithms drenched in abyssmal continuity are less in number as the six-eyed falcon parades its glory in a stained-glass symphony. A wrinkle or fold with such a name as bedlam is ignited and spread wingspan and eyelid wide in tumultuous grief. The ends of the snow-black universe are pulled farther away from one-another's gravitational fury, but only the future is bent as the present screams, untampered with. As I sit at my desk among the cloud arches of Sulcecia slums, my calligraphy-birthed ink and green-backed scroll are pulled east, foreshadowing the cataclysmic invasion of once-distant space. But my children's children will observe this transient love letter as I did, like gazing up a ceiling that is bound to fall the moment you leave the room. Remember Lucia. ...yeah i don't know what the fuck "Remember Lucia" means. but uh. i like it. __________________ muthafuck the wagon, come join the band Last edited by med mechanica; 02-03-2005 at 10:37 PM.

#2 (permalink) 02-03-2005, 08:28 PM
heat_blitz Registered User Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 2,243	..that is bound to fall the 'moment'? you leave the room... I think you missed that word. Nice writing though, I cant exactly understand all of that, let alone come up with an interpretation. I think the part from "The end of the snow-black universe...." is the better part, mainly because I have no idea what the first part says.

#3 (permalink) 02-03-2005, 10:38 PM
med mechanica siguen los cuerpos Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 126	ah you're right. fixed. yeah, i think i started writing with a bit more focus once i got past the first two sentences, but i like them all the same. thanks for the response. __________________ muthafuck the wagon, come join the band

#4 (permalink) 04-19-2005, 01:40 PM
gogo Banned Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: TEMPORARY BAN ON THIS USER! *RMJL Posts: 1,727	nice experiment

#5 (permalink) 04-19-2005, 11:27 PM
lulubuns stoner chick Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 112	very cool!

#6 (permalink) 04-20-2005, 01:01 AM
Natural Mystic Master Jedi Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: a world with no invisible boarders Posts: 1,058	Very nice, I really like your style of writting and how everything is so well described! __________________ It won’t take too long when you’re short of time to point out some good left about mankind. You can learn to love what you can destroy. That’s what I call sacrificing what you’ve got for freedom -Over It Try not. Do or do not, there is no try... -Yoda What is the _Matrix?_ Don't worry, be happy. If you want to be productive, be creative. We love the all the all of you. Our lands are green and skies are blue

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