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Old 02-03-2005, 03:43 AM
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Snow-Black Universe (written while baked)

I wrote this by basically thinking of each word as i wrote the word before it. Oddly enough, it does have a sort of strange meaning to it, but i'll leave it open to interpretation. Enjoy:

The transatlantic algorithms drenched in abyssmal continuity are less in number as the six-eyed falcon parades its glory in a stained-glass symphony. A wrinkle or fold with such a name as bedlam is ignited and spread wingspan and eyelid wide in tumultuous grief. The ends of the snow-black universe are pulled farther away from one-another's gravitational fury, but only the future is bent as the present screams, untampered with. As I sit at my desk among the cloud arches of Sulcecia slums, my calligraphy-birthed ink and green-backed scroll are pulled east, foreshadowing the cataclysmic invasion of once-distant space. But my children's children will observe this transient love letter as I did, like gazing up a ceiling that is bound to fall the moment you leave the room. Remember Lucia.


...yeah i don't know what the fuck "Remember Lucia" means. but uh. i like it.
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Old 02-03-2005, 08:28 PM
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..that is bound to fall the 'moment'? you leave the room...

I think you missed that word. Nice writing though, I cant exactly understand all of that, let alone come up with an interpretation.

I think the part from "The end of the snow-black universe...." is the better part, mainly because I have no idea what the first part says.
 
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Old 02-03-2005, 10:38 PM
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ah you're right. fixed.

yeah, i think i started writing with a bit more focus once i got past the first two sentences, but i like them all the same. thanks for the response.
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nice experiment
 
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Old 04-19-2005, 11:27 PM
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very cool!
 
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Old 04-20-2005, 01:01 AM
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Very nice, I really like your style of writting and how everything is so well described!
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