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08-25-2003, 03:02 AM
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A Song I wrote
It's been published, so there is a copy right!!
but i thought y'all might wanna check it out..... "In The Dark" (refrain) Lying in the dark I see your eyes Lit up like the stars on a moonless night Lying in your arms I feel the warmth Wrapped up together as we bare this storm (verse 1) Tonight I felt the fire in our love Rain drops falling from the clouds above Lightening dances on our lips Electric touches in our finger tips (verse2) This is how love is supposed to feel Everything inside me tells me it's real Cause you and I were meant to be I care for you as you care for me Repeat refrain (verse3) Time has no place for you and I Our love is as endless as the sky Though our hearts are heavey as can be This is the way things have to be (Verse 4) But lightening will dance on our lips Feel those electric touches in our finger tips Cause you and I were meant to be I care for you as you care for me Repeat Refrain.... So Tell me what y'all think, and please be as honest as possible....Thanks All ~~D0LL~~
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08-26-2003, 06:09 AM
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well.... kinda red roses and all that fluffy stuff... well some like it that way.
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08-26-2003, 06:21 AM
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red roses and fluffy stuff lol
i think the lyrics sound awesome!i really like it. what kind of tempo and i'd like to know what kind of music is backin it up too
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08-28-2003, 03:10 AM
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That song has a medium tempo with a mixed sound... i listen to everything except country...i have only written a cupple of songs i mostly write poetry...Love if all fluffy and stuff...if you've ever been in love...then you should know what i mean...thanks for the feed-back
 glad to hear y'll liked it...
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