Poem & Drawing

So here's a poem I did for class, and a drawing I did on the back of a job application (i never turned it in, don't worry).
Both fit in together pretty well.
Enjoy (:
As the fear of zombies continues to grow
The expectations for them are getting low
But although they smell a lot
They don't like being shot
Zombies are people too, y'know.

And for the picture....



Hehe.

e: I guess I should add that the girl getting shot is a zombie. I'm not violent or anything, and don't sit around drawing live people getting shot. But regardless of how peaceful I try and think, I'll always love those shoot'em'up video games/movies/books with the gory icky zombies. Puurrrr

Wow, I mean...really?
I posted this up here so I could get feedback.
18 people have looked at it and no one's responded.
Really?

[CosmicSerpent]

Haha, pretty cool man. When I first glanced at the drawing, the bullet looked like a thumb and the gun looked like some kind of crazy robotic arm. So without seeing the entry hole, it looks like an arm is reaching into her skull. Maybe inspiration for a future drawing?

[tardy421]

here's your feedback: i fucking love that drawing!!!!! i wish i could shadow as good as you, also liked the thickness of it all. it was a very dense picture

In lieu of the revived zombie thread:

bump

[head4life]

Zombies fucking own!

All of you suck for not commenting on her zombie picture/poem.

That poem is great goes so well with the picture that picture just is such a trip I like the blood like goo coming out of her mouth and the bullet coming out of the bottom is just insannnneeee.

"I'll always love those shoot'em'up video games/movies/books with the gory icky zombies. Puurrrr"

You're the shit! Lol

[scoobydooby67]

you stole that poem from me.

and the picture of me.

[Cali Ounces]

zombies are coo, be tight if that was what happened when the world ended.

cuz id sure like to fuck some of my neighbors up!

[GurdleMcTurtle]

HOLY SHIT PINK ODDITY I love your drawing, and zombies
WOOO!

[ipack]

point of order: if you're going to kill zombies, i would recommend hollowpoint rounds which will create greater trauma on impact. The bullet in your pic is obviously a full metal jacketed round because it was a clean through and through shot.

nice work on both though. I like the rotting lips that extend through the cheek area. I look at this chick and think: "she was probably hot when she wasn't an undead zombie"

[PJV575]

Haha, I love the poem and the picture! +rep fo sho!

[thesilversurfer]

yeah it definitely helps a bunch to make it a habit to reach out to many diverse and broad styles of drawing/sketching/painting/etc.

in that manner one is able to take the best of whichever world to more tactically approach a piece

the different line/shade styles like sketch, generic, pointilism, etc.
also different sized pieces help you build up your skill and technique

most of my pencil ability comes from years of sitting through grade school, drawing instead of paying attention, hah.

cool drawing

Thanks everyone.
I generally just sit and draw like cartoony stuff such as this. Not really cartoony like Loony Toons. But, it's hard to explain
But I'm always up for new things.
Especially in class. I'm really able to switch gears and sway towards another medium/style/whatever.
But I hear ya about sketching in class.