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Old 04-27-2008, 09:10 AM
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I have this poem, can anyone tell me the meaning behind it?

Bend your soul to Nature's whim
Illusions wrought in choice
Listen for the unsung hymn
Sustained without a voice
Bind the mindless wretch inside
To all ungodly laws abide
Pray to reap the Seraph's place
Condemned to apathy's embrace.
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Swift words slicing, Drip like vitriol on your mind
Lyrical genocide slides by, undying
Seething beyond time, flying
Waiting for absolution in a black velvet gloom
finally resolved, turns to dust in a tomb.

How about this one?
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If anyone cares:

The first poem is about mans struggle between the laws of nature, the laws of god, and the laws of other men and how little freedom you actually have.

The first one is based on how much more powerful words are as a weapon than anything tangible. The pen is mightier than the sword sort of thing.
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