Some of my darker poetry. this is the good stuff, or so they say.

[GimmieMore]

So Little Time

I feel the urge again
Just a little bit at a time
But a little is all it takes
To erase alot of time
So many days
Weeks
Months
Too much time - to stumble now
I tell myself I can be strong
But really - I don't know how
Sometimes I just wanna bleed
Sometimes I wanna force-feed
Myself pills - they're so sweet
Val's and vic's......
So good to me
But they're not
That's just my mind
Playing tricks on me
So many ways to fuck up
SO LITTLE TIME.......

[GimmieMore]

Untitled

beautiful teardrops fall down your face
from the pain i caused
i open your veins to spill your life force
you look so radiant while you die
but i can no longer see you in the dark


i watch you through watery vision
but you don't see my pain
you don't give a damn about me
or the fact that i'm bleeding to death
on the floor
crying
so beautiful
as i die
your reflection.....

[GimmieMore]

Done


I'm done with you
I'm finished
The end
Finito
Finé
I have a life to live without you
I don't have time to play
All these childish-ass bullshit games
My little cousin is more serious about his fucking toy trains
Than you ever were about me
But thats not what you claimed
How do you fall out of love?
BULLSHIT!
That's pretend
That shit's fake
It's not real
Confront what really went on
I was depressed -
You couldn't deal
So you went running back to this *****
Good ol' dependable "Dj"
You know this ***** stable
He's broker than an unknown DJ
He's not going anywhere
Nobody else wants him
But why'd he take you back?
Just cause the other *****s taunt him?
It doesn't matter though
Cause you were meant to be together
That why your FIRST relationship lasted...
until.....
we....
got....
together.....
Hmm....
So what exactly does that say about you?
I know!
You're a stupid, cheating, lying ass bitch
And I was dumb as fuck for trusting you
But now I've gotten smarter
Best believe I see
Not only is this how it is now
This is how it will always be
And by the way -
Stop calling my fucking phone
YOU AIN'T GETTING SHIT ELSE FROM ME
And you know...
This isn't nessecarily the way it HAD to be
But there's one thing to remember
BITCH
You broke up with me

[GimmieMore]

Fuck You


Fuck you
Yeah that's right -
I said it
If you don't understand by now
Then i guess you'll never get it
It was never all about
This shit
That shit
Him
Her
You
Or me
It was all about we
The both of us together
But you're the one who left
In times of stormy weather
I was the one with the problem
So you took it upon yourself
To use that as an excuse
To put our love up on a shelf
And yeah, at the time it hurt
But now I'm over that shit
I found someone who can treat me better
So stressing over you
It's time to quit
And you know....
I'm to nice to do this shit normally
But now I'm gonna tell you like it is
And maybe then you'll see
I gave you everything I had
And more if I could do it
But after a while it didn't matter
And you know what?
That's how you blew it
You made me come to realize
To think you were true
I should've been institutionalized
Cause I had to be crazy
Bitch, you played me super shady
And you thought we could be friends?
Squash that
I'm fine
YOU'RE CRAZY
And you what?
I'm sorry about what happened with the baby
But you know what else?
It wouldn't have happened if you were my lady
Not only was it impossible
But I didn't get you in that kinda shit
I thought I told he was a loser
But I guess you're too damn thick
Not in the thighs, but in the mind
And you must have lost your mind
What made you not wanna be mine?
Were you on drugs?
Drinking too much?
Oh wait, I remember...
My problems were too much
To intense
You couldn't deal
HOW THE FUCK WAS I SUPPOSED TO FEEL??
It was my life that fell apart
And instead of healing my heart
You decided we should part
YOU FUCKING BROKE MY HEART
So excuse me if I come off a little rude
I just can't believe you up and fucking left me for that dude
I thought I told you before
That ***** can't do shit for you
And look at where you're standing now
And who's standing next to you
And before you try to dispute what I say
FUCK THAT
You know it's true
Fuck your denial
I don't have time
That stupid bullshit ain't worth one goddamn dime
Matter fact
It's not worth a penny
I've heard all your excuses
And believe me there were plenty
But you dropped me like I was hot
You think I'm still trying to cater to you??
NOT!
You must be smoking something stronger than pot
And that shit is making you crazy
You might wanna stop
And while you're at it
Stop fucking with me
I'm tired of your games
I played them for too long
It's about fucking time for that to change
And I know this shit sounds harsh
But this shit's straight from the heart
I ripped out the poison dart
That you left bleeding in my heart
It's time for a new direction
A clean slate
A fresh start
You never understood what you had with me
But you know, I think eventually you'll see
When you realize
That there's nobody on this earth better than me
Nobody's gonna cater to your bullshit like I did, see?
I was sad at first
Then filled with anxiety
Now I'm glad
FUCK THAT
I'm motherfucking giddy
Between the two of us....
You lose, I win
You'll be lost without me

[scoobydooby67]

those were cool.

i like those last two the best.

very powerful, using direct vernacular instead of flowery beat-around-the-bush euphemisms.

ive got some stuff i could share with you if you wanted.

[GimmieMore]

Thanks Scooby, those last two wee partof a set of 4 (Or 5 I can't remember) that I wrote after my ex broke up ith me. Anger makes me a good writer.

I consier myself a wordsmith..... language is a passion of mine......

I would love to read some of your poetry. Either posted or Pm'ed. I love poetry.... I love for people to critique what I write, and reading others poems can really start to inspire me.....

[TuxxiT]

I read these, came back, and read them again. The last two were pretty strong, and I feel a little bit like I can relate, seeing as my girlfriend and I just broke up.

Sometimes maybe it's better to feel the pain and the anger and loss so that you realize how great your life truly can be when all the bullshit clears. They say you don't know what you've got til it's gone, but I believe in some relationships, the line gets blurred, and people begin to cling to the smallest of hopes within partnerships, hoping that the spark will return, or the fighting will stop. They lose sight of how happy they were while they were single, or just dating, and get caught up in all the downsides of an unhealthy relationship.

I think that maybe you've seen the light (just maybe haha!) and now you know what your limits and expectations are. I'm a sucker for dark, deep poetry when I'm feeling blue, and I really liked these poems. Hopefully now all your poems that you post will have a lighter touch to them, as you move, and grow onwards.

Sorry if that post was way off topic.... so, in a nut shelll, I LIKE THE POEMS!!

[GimmieMore]

Thank you for the "review" Tuxxit.

These aren't recent. They are jut some of my favorites. And I have deeper, more depressed poetry than this. Another goo one entitled "Choice". I think I'll post it if I can fiind it already typed.