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SourDieselChick · #1 (**permalink**) 02-28-2008, 10:13 AM

http://www.poetbay.com/poetHome.php?writerId=1202

been writing on and off since i was 15. my most popular one and i think my best was "The Only Forever" the rest i think are shit but you be the judge, no hate please.

Clueless · #2 (**permalink**) 02-28-2008, 11:19 AM

I love writing, it's an awesoem release. Keep it up!

+ rep!

pbmike15 · #3 (**permalink**) 02-28-2008, 11:38 AM

I read the one you thought was your best and I liked it.

I'm too stoned and tired to read to others.

SourDieselChick · #4 (**permalink**) 03-13-2008, 02:02 PM

bumpage. with a link to some old old stuff i wrote that i think is OK. http://charcoalstares.deviantart.com/

leerox · #5 (**permalink**) 03-13-2008, 02:11 PM

I also thought portable friend was good. The dark tone in your writing sugests youve suffered from depression in the past. Good work.

#6 (**permalink**) 03-13-2008, 03:48 PM

Really pretty. I like portable friends the most as well.
I never wrote poetry. The only one I ever wrote?
(I was like...10):
I'm in love with a Spirit
I'm in love with a ghost
He turns on my light
And butters my toast.

...lol.

probus · #7 (**permalink**) 03-17-2008, 05:45 AM

lassie-- god bless u-- u've got a leg up on all ur peers-- will it last?-- only time will tell-- if u keep hanging around a place like this, it won't-- move on-- u've got a sparkle of ur own-- Regard, probus

SourDieselChick · #8 (**permalink**) 08-28-2008, 11:27 PM

new shit up now

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#1 (permalink) 02-28-2008, 10:13 AM
SourDieselChick get high like planes Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: NJ Posts: 2,056	my poetry http://www.poetbay.com/poetHome.php?writerId=1202 been writing on and off since i was 15. my most popular one and i think my best was "The Only Forever" the rest i think are shit but you be the judge, no hate please. __________________

#2 (permalink) 02-28-2008, 11:19 AM
Clueless Registered User Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: VA Posts: 424	I love writing, it's an awesoem release. Keep it up! + rep!

#3 (permalink) 02-28-2008, 11:38 AM
pbmike15 gone Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 2,050	I read the one you thought was your best and I liked it. I'm too stoned and tired to read to others.

#4 (permalink) 03-13-2008, 02:02 PM
SourDieselChick get high like planes Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: NJ Posts: 2,056	bumpage. with a link to some old old stuff i wrote that i think is OK. http://charcoalstares.deviantart.com/ __________________

#5 (permalink) 03-13-2008, 02:11 PM
leerox Registered User Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 458	I also thought portable friend was good. The dark tone in your writing sugests youve suffered from depression in the past. Good work.

#6 (permalink) 03-13-2008, 03:48 PM
Pink Oddity Guest Posts: n/a	Really pretty. I like portable friends the most as well. I never wrote poetry. The only one I ever wrote? (I was like...10): I'm in love with a Spirit I'm in love with a ghost He turns on my light And butters my toast. ...lol.

#7 (permalink) 03-17-2008, 05:45 AM
probus Registered User Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: pennsylvania Posts: 80	lassie-- god bless u-- u've got a leg up on all ur peers-- will it last?-- only time will tell-- if u keep hanging around a place like this, it won't-- move on-- u've got a sparkle of ur own-- Regard, probus

#8 (permalink) 08-28-2008, 11:27 PM
SourDieselChick get high like planes Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: NJ Posts: 2,056	Re: my poetry new shit up now __________________

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