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benju1031 · #1 (**permalink**) 05-29-2007, 01:34 AM

Basically, for english class i was recently assigned a project where I had to write a sonnet using ionic penameter. For those of you who don't know, ionic pentameter uses 10 beats per line and has an abab cdcd efef gg rhyme scheme. Shakespeare used ionic pentameter to write his sonnets and thats why we had to do so. Anyways, I decided to spice things up a bit for my teacher and i hope that you guys like my sonnet.

Monday Through Sunday

1.You first must get the Dutchy nice and wet,<o

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2.Only then will the outer leaf come off.<o

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3.Breaking the inner leaf now is a threat,<o

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4.Now pour the guts on to the floor, don’t cough.<o

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5.You should make sure they are done breaking up,<o

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6.This is where you judge the amount of leaf.<o

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7.Now twisty, twisty above a nice big cup<o

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8.Time to wrap it up, but don’t miss the kief.<o

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9.Perfection, perfection everyone watch, <o

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10.You are left with a nice, fat, soggy blunt.<o

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11.The crystals stick to your fingers like starch.<o

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12.Young-ins watch out, the cops are on the hunt<o

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13.This is the time for your favorite part,<o

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14.Spark it in your special place in the park.

Blowin'Chronic · #2 (**permalink**) 05-29-2007, 03:04 AM

are you really gona hand that in, cause that would be bad ass.

BrassMonkey81 · #3 (**permalink**) 05-29-2007, 03:13 AM

I dont like wet blunts

TheHempress · #4 (**permalink**) 05-29-2007, 03:17 AM

I think that's an excellent sonnet. I like it a lot.

benju1031 · #5 (**permalink**) 05-29-2007, 03:44 AM

\On the sheet that im gunna hand in i washed out a cartoon of a guy putting visine in and used it as the background of the sonnet.

smokingjoe68 · #6 (**permalink**) 05-30-2007, 03:07 PM

very good, ty, I'm trying to learn different structures in this, my new found passion, I'm going to give this one a whirl.

noticed line 7 has 11 syllobals (spelling, sorry). If you find time, I would greatly value some input from you on my poems in this section in my thread entitled, "Euphoria". peace

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#1 (permalink) 05-29-2007, 01:34 AM
benju1031 Registered User Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 14	Da Piff Sonnet Basically, for english class i was recently assigned a project where I had to write a sonnet using ionic penameter. For those of you who don't know, ionic pentameter uses 10 beats per line and has an abab cdcd efef gg rhyme scheme. Shakespeare used ionic pentameter to write his sonnets and thats why we had to do so. Anyways, I decided to spice things up a bit for my teacher and i hope that you guys like my sonnet. Monday Through Sunday 1.You first must get the Dutchy nice and wet,<o></o> 2.Only then will the outer leaf come off.<o></o> 3.Breaking the inner leaf now is a threat,<o></o> 4.Now pour the guts on to the floor, don’t cough.<o></o> 5.You should make sure they are done breaking up,<o></o> 6.This is where you judge the amount of leaf.<o></o> 7.Now twisty, twisty above a nice big cup<o></o> 8.Time to wrap it up, but don’t miss the kief.<o></o> 9.Perfection, perfection everyone watch, <o></o> 10.You are left with a nice, fat, soggy blunt.<o></o> 11.The crystals stick to your fingers like starch.<o></o> 12.Young-ins watch out, the cops are on the hunt<o></o> 13.This is the time for your favorite part,<o></o> 14.Spark it in your special place in the park. Last edited by benju1031; 05-29-2007 at 01:37 AM.

#2 (permalink) 05-29-2007, 03:04 AM
Blowin'Chronic Registered User Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 129	are you really gona hand that in, cause that would be bad ass. __________________ Blowin' Chronic

#3 (permalink) 05-29-2007, 03:13 AM
BrassMonkey81 Registered User Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 237	I dont like wet blunts

#4 (permalink) 05-29-2007, 03:17 AM
TheHempress I am a queen, understand? Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: PA supermod Posts: 10,117 Blog Entries: 2	I think that's an excellent sonnet. I like it a lot. __________________ And I've got your pawns and your bishops and castles all inside the palm of my hand.

#5 (permalink) 05-29-2007, 03:44 AM
benju1031 Registered User Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 14	\On the sheet that im gunna hand in i washed out a cartoon of a guy putting visine in and used it as the background of the sonnet.

#6 (permalink) 05-30-2007, 03:07 PM
smokingjoe68 Registered MJ User Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: right here Posts: 1,768	very good, ty, I'm trying to learn different structures in this, my new found passion, I'm going to give this one a whirl. noticed line 7 has 11 syllobals (spelling, sorry). If you find time, I would greatly value some input from you on my poems in this section in my thread entitled, "Euphoria". peace __________________ if you want to make God laugh, tell him your plans for the next ten years. Last edited by smokingjoe68; 05-30-2007 at 03:11 PM.

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