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Old 05-29-2007, 01:34 AM
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Wink Da Piff Sonnet

Basically, for english class i was recently assigned a project where I had to write a sonnet using ionic penameter. For those of you who don't know, ionic pentameter uses 10 beats per line and has an abab cdcd efef gg rhyme scheme. Shakespeare used ionic pentameter to write his sonnets and thats why we had to do so. Anyways, I decided to spice things up a bit for my teacher and i hope that you guys like my sonnet.

Monday Through Sunday

1.You first must get the Dutchy nice and wet,<o></o>
2.Only then will the outer leaf come off.<o></o>
3.Breaking the inner leaf now is a threat,<o></o>
4.Now pour the guts on to the floor, don’t cough.<o></o>
5.You should make sure they are done breaking up,<o></o>
6.This is where you judge the amount of leaf.<o></o>
7.Now twisty, twisty above a nice big cup<o></o>
8.Time to wrap it up, but don’t miss the kief.<o></o>
9.Perfection, perfection everyone watch, <o></o>
10.You are left with a nice, fat, soggy blunt.<o></o>
11.The crystals stick to your fingers like starch.<o></o>
12.Young-ins watch out, the cops are on the hunt<o></o>
13.This is the time for your favorite part,<o></o>
14.Spark it in your special place in the park.



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Old 05-29-2007, 03:04 AM
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are you really gona hand that in, cause that would be bad ass.
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Old 05-29-2007, 03:13 AM
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I dont like wet blunts
 
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Old 05-29-2007, 03:17 AM
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I think that's an excellent sonnet. I like it a lot.
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\On the sheet that im gunna hand in i washed out a cartoon of a guy putting visine in and used it as the background of the sonnet.
 
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very good, ty, I'm trying to learn different structures in this, my new found passion, I'm going to give this one a whirl.

noticed line 7 has 11 syllobals (spelling, sorry). If you find time, I would greatly value some input from you on my poems in this section in my thread entitled, "Euphoria". peace
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