babes first eddit poem

[ideal]

this one has alot more ryhme to it but I didnt get all the meaning I wanted to in it thus this isnt my last eddit

My baby girl when I think of you it makes me feel tight ..super light and dead on right .. I take sight with this emotion that soars like a bird in a spiral flight , its like its fate, for me and you to make
our lives a freaking awesome long lasting first date .. filled with special times that binds us like a kid that sees himself being great with his first date, unfortunatly you got a dumbass like me that fumbles and cant see sometimes what I want to be so I get mean and hatefull, dispite my inner best light that gets in shitty fights with my poor babys cleaver night but you transform it and perform a lightning fast trick,that cures mislead dead heads, that sometimes just wanna lye in bed even cant count to ten let alone be in love with their own loving side by side ginger pure loving heads but all you do is kiss me and it gives me feeling that I might be able to fight for my right to take you into my arms and let you overthrow my control its like your my better sides guardian angle thats defending the bad sides troll for no reason but for my bitter self induced fight thats just crazy it makes me cry and smile while I put my hands on your perfect body and kiss your perly white teeth I can invision our selves with a bunch of mini you's and me's being in a perfect suburbanizes white picket fenced funcky mansion while dancing to a jungle beat bumping our feet with some fast tapping heat that writes our initials super deep.