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What do you think of my rap?

Discussion in 'Apprentice Marijuana Consumption' started by Marijuana Time, Jul 26, 2011.

  1. #1 Marijuana Time, Jul 26, 2011
    This is a verse I wrote to a 3 Peat Instrumental
    [ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FprgUNalM9Y]‪Opposite of Nostalgia‬‏ - YouTube[/ame]

    Let me know what you think
     
  2. #2 Zeb0, Jul 26, 2011
    Stop CAM recording. Buy a mic.

    Or, record your voice on the cam, put video on computer and rip audio from the video.

    Layer voice over audio track so you can at least edit good.
     
  3. #3 aerials47, Jul 26, 2011
    not bad, but a couple times could have flowed better for sure.
    and he's right, buy a mic man. especially if you're going to get serious it's a great investment, my friend records his own shit at home.
     
  4. #4 LordOfWeed, Jul 26, 2011
    Yeah honestly I feel like you couldnt have worse quality if you tried

    as for the rest

    The lyrics are cool the flow is OFF

    obviously your new to it so keep trying and practicing its just like anything else.... work on that flow.
     
  5. #5 3lephunk, Jul 26, 2011
    you can maybe ghostwrite for me
     
  6. #6 CityCoast, Jul 26, 2011
    Like others said, lyrics are alright (if youre new to this).

    The flow of it was just unpleasant.

    Bad choice of an instrumental too.
     

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