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Originally Posted by Duplicity  I really like your sentence structure and word choice. I think the problem with this one was the introduction. A lot of people on this forum find it difficult to get through large amounts of text without getting bored. The intro. was sort of long and it was difficult to understand the dialogue. Maybe for your next article get a homeless guy to read it over and if he approves it should be good to go for GC as a whole. |
There is a distinct difference between being too lazy to read a block of text and simply being unable to comprehend said text because the person writing it has no concept of proper syntax, grammar, or sentence structure.
