[thatcrazydude]

i liked it, one of the things that bugged me about the cowboy bebop series was that i didnt think the elaborated on the story of the syndicates, spike, and vicious enough, throughout the series i was fairly confused by a lot of things but i think i got the general story of it all.

also i really like your writing i thought all your characters were very well rounded, there was also interesting conflict and what not, the only thing is that maybe the time and setting could use a bit more description. i think if someone who read this that didnt know anything about coqboy bebop would be very confused, also im not sure but it seemed to make a significant jump between different times with very little inidication, the baby at the beginning of the story was vicious wasnt it?

overall i really liked it and would enjoy reading more