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Old 05-04-2008, 10:58 PM
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Haiku

I started writing haikus in class the other day because they were funny and easy to write. then just a few minutes ago i was smoking and one just came to me... normally i smoke out of my bong (phx trinity) but i was in a bit of a time crunch so for the first time in many weeks i used my little bubbler. The bubblers bowl is just inches in front of my eyes as I hit it, and thats when the words came, i watched the flames light the magic herbs and as it cherried the smoke filled the glass. here is the haiku:

flames kiss the fine green,
orange cocoon transforms to black,
the white smoke fills me

flames kiss the fine green,
orange cocoon transforms to black,
the smoke changes me


I dont know which way I like better, some feedback would be cool. Everyone post your stoney hikus too and share them with the world.




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