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Old 04-27-2008, 05:06 PM
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I like it, maybe run a couple words through a thesaurus to keep repetition down (the word "shot" in the 4th stanza), but otherwise a nice piece of work!
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I find that if I sacrifice an animal, my highs are better.
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