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Old 02-07-2008, 01:06 AM
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He better switch up his style. About every amatuer rapper out there has the same sound. Lyrically he is pretty good. Nothing great.

"two tracks" - Talks about his gat shooting and rhymes it. Repeats himself a few times. Talks about shooting people and then getting his dick sucked then buying some nice clothes. End of the verse comes together well, how the past on the duck tape taste rhyme was at least original.

What I'm saying is, he's still extremely young and you can practically hear his influences. He's in that Juelz/ Weezy mold, and his metaphors and rhymes are about the same things those dudes already ripped. If yo're going to write about money women and drugs you have to make your words unique and original. You need to string multiple lines together to have some meaning, just rhyming verses isn't good enough, one verse should intelligently segway to the next. You digg? He doesn't do this stuff.

He has some raw talent.

Same shit, different day.
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