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yo man, great paper, i read the whole thing. i think your a good writer. your argument is backed with various cites of evidence and supporting information. i think, for someone who is naive when it comes to the legalization movement, would be better informed after reading your paper. Your thesis is clear and concise, and is thoroughly developed and proven throughout your paper. i only found ONE error. "and in sever cases can become addictive" just a minor spelling error. keep it real man, and once again, good job.
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