I'm reading through it now, so far it looks great
, I'll pm you any constructive criticism I feel might be helpful.
One suggestion right off, everywhere you mention what legalization
would do, it'd be better to say what legalization
will do. Legalization is inevitable, so talking about the changes it
will bring is more accurate than talking about the changes it could bring. Also, if all of us have a positive attitude about the inevitableness of legalization this can rub off on the people we interact with, which can help in a positive way to change public opinion towards marijuana.
