I think this is a great idea. Nice work, by the way.
I've got a little to add:
The World in a Saucer
A momentary aurora of light
Blinding the eyes
Of a lonely heart
And piercing the silence
Which slithers on the
Crimson atmosphere
Leaving thorough
Paradigms and cliches
On the surface of
The faded leaves
Of memories
Spiraling parallel
Between a thought
And a Broken life
Is a decorum gesture
Merely of relation
To the attention
Given in a polished
Shed of eye-lining
Blood droplets
And draperies?
Such Immaculate tears
Trapped in dreams
Reminisce of
open-handed
Late-October Sadness
Of my wondering
Mystic lady-friend
Mourning(morning)
Along leaflets
Binding to the
River's outskirt